Suicide Senyru

Suicide Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P
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Romancing Suicide

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You write of edgy dying

then all the young girls will swoon

deception by death



© 2013 Frieda P


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lol its tragic that people will cheapen their life in a way like that to get attention need a girl then living is the way to do that dying is just stupid for that reason however I won''t dismiss all suicidal tendencies as a pick up scheme some of us really hurt and should not be alone

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yep, I so agree, but to do the former is really destructive if you're young and impressionable read.. read more



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There's nothing romantic about any form of suicide in any way... I really don't understand people sometimes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hear, Hear!
Or death by deception? Thought provoking :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

They both work well, I think the way you wrote it is more thought provoking. :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks :-)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Dangerous courtship indeed! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha Divya, aren't they all, aren't they all? ;-)
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

Oh My Yes! What was I thinking?!
Not sure how to interpret this one but you certainly have the art of senyru nailed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Then you're not paying attention, and thanks!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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