Ill Padre

Everybody knows,

 no one speaks

silence is golden and deadly

you won't live forever 

your amoebas' keep chomping at my brain

you've successfully stigmatized my prosperity

your silent sword

has yielded me mute 

You'll be gone and I'll live on 

coasting along simmering in this shadow

amidst your past

 unforgivable transgressions

Absolution will utterly never be granted

unless you find it in another dimension

if for some inescapable, 

irrational reasoning,

you repent 

 unspeakable truths,

should penance 

forgive your trespasses

IF they shall open the gates of paradise to you

I'd gladly burn in 

hell for eternity

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

An interesting blend of religion, truth and condemnation. Unfortunate, but somehow understandable that you would condemn the innocent to the fires of Hell in the afterlife too. I guess after being licked by flames for so long, you get used to the heat of the kitchen.

[Frieda P]

On occasion the heat in the kitchen is tolerable but you know how those flare ups catch you by surprise...thanks LA.

[Distant horizons]

Powerful words, showing the answers sought weigh heavily and would be the only true release.

[Night]

...brutal.

[Frieda P]

...truth.

[Night]

...yup, I figured as much...out with the bad...in with the good...:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Dark and vengeful my lady of hades!

[Frieda P]

Hardly tastes of vengeance...