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A Poem by Frieda P

I pour out my heart to you in hopes of a bond
you turn on me like a tiger in lurch for the prey
how can your heart be so stone cold as ice
I expose my soul and you squash my heart

I merely wanted a dance with you in kind
love is not a word that jails your heart
rather one that captures each of our senses
to last a lifetime of eternitys

To bring to heightened awareness and awe
to sleep with a safe place to fall all night long
how can three of the smallest, simplest words
cause such a stir of confusion and irrational fear?

Three small words, are not meant to bring you down
yet rather to lift you to new heights to soar
free within the knowledge that someone adores
all that is the essence of your total embodiment

My heart leapt free and openly to engage you
words impact and impart a special meaning
to all that exists between spaces of
 torrid languishing and
 merely coffee with the morning paper 

If I'm not important enough to speak the truth
walk out the door and let me find the true meaning
stop tugging on my heart strings with your charms
my feminine wiles are not at play here

I'm not trying to trap the great white hunter
I feel your lips but not the warmth of contentment
just wanted to tie our hearts together with a note
that sky write the three little words that fall into you
yet written in the sky
 or in the sand it disappears

Time will not erase what's in my heart, 
so I say those 
three little words.... 
 can't wait forever 
for one of us to come to our senses
  
come onto me, ruffle my ears, trace my heart 

whisper it...

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© 2013 Frieda P


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Love can be a terrifying word when its always comes with such pain. Yet here you plead its case, make it out to be nice and innocent and I love that. This is how love should be yet too often it is as you say, the one you love turns on you and stomps on your heart. I can clearly see both sides of love here. Awesome write yet again Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Love this review, thanks so much, wasn't sure if it computed, so much I wanted to say, but you read .. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)



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You're a writing machine these days aren't you? You've got a gift for words and penning some interesting stuff. This is something I would think would be somewhat of an anthem for some woman who are starving to her those three little words that go unheard for so long. Well, I've got three little words for you now. You're so good. Okay, maybe it's actually four, whatever. Great writing my friend. You seem unstoppable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow very good Caught my eye with just the tittle although there isnt one haha

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha funny! thanks so much ;-)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

My pleasure1
You have something that plays a song many hearts will know.
Well conceived, well penned, and so clever in it's honesty that it does not drag hidden aggression like so many direct questions often do.
Amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm liking you more each day. ;-)
Thanks David!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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