Sunset in A Bottle

Sunset in A Bottle

A Poem by Frieda P

If you could capture
                sunset in a bottle
would you share it
          with all the world to see
   could you put it on a shelf 
          & keep it for yourself
   should we share the trappings
 within a smile
planting seeds of hope
          to sprout a miracle
     if we graciously captured
               sunset in a bottle

 

© 2013 Frieda P


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We had the most amazing sunset the other evening, so much so the Kid was like, "What is that in the sky?" It was the sun, obviously *laugh* but it looked so cool. Dark orange and hung low...you could look right at it and not hurt your eyes. This reminded me of that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry I missed this one the kimmer, that sounds lovely, and *laugh* the Kid...
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

No worries ;-)



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This brought my day a big bottle of sunshine! Thank you! --David

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh, I am so happy that it did so.....thanks David.
you do come up with the most wonderful titles, I love the optimism

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

that photo was begging for it, thanks :-)
I like fragment poems very much, this was quite pretty. When I read a poem that is written for beauty, I am nearly always impressed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks MKS nice to see you, haven't seen you around in a while.
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PP
Here is now a challenge you have thrown at a photographer! Beautiful x

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

hahaha..may be you should buy the bottled ones from now on, saucy!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Nah....I like to live dangerously...ha. Besides there's this great market with all fresh veggies, h.. read more
PP

11 Years Ago

Can't beat that, I had two chili plants growing in a pot by the window but they died cos of lack of .. read more
That was really beautiful, Frieda. :D
I could kind of imagine the whole thing playing out in my mind. ^^


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's pretty cool Amanda, thanks! :-)
In 12 short lines you have managed to bring this captured sunset to my day. To have the ability to grab the colors from the sky, place them in a glass container and share them with someone special would be pristinely beautiful. Very nice Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I saw that lovely photo and was taken by it, wasn't sure if I could convey the feeling, I'm so glad .. read more

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Added on February 18, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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