Wrong Sex Senryu

When you say my name

        the sun rises in my loins

then you called me 'jack' 

Reviews

[A. V. Madison]

Uh oh! That's a one way street to being a one night stand, right there. In fact, I'd leave right then and there. Well given the fact that said man was still 'entertaining' (have to keep it PG for the young-uns) a woman, he's probably just bisexual. Keep your head up, Frieda, you've still got a chance! Perhaps there's a marriage and a shoe-shopping partner...? Haha!

xoxo and well wishes,
~Mary Alice Victors

[Frieda P]

lol Maddie, are you old enough to read this? ;-) x

[KAOlmsted]

Eesh, between that burning sensation in your loins and the fact this guy would rather be with a dude I'd say you're having a wicked bad sex day xD

[Frieda P]

LMAO, thanks! I needed that. xD

[KAOlmsted]

Always here to help xD

[Frieda P]

mwah!

[Deron Alexis]

lol it would suck if that happens i'm gonna make sure that my first time is hers as well and ima say her name in my head so i don't mix it up with Halle Berry or something like that

[Frieda P]

Ha good luck with all that Deron...you know what they say about plans...

[Rob Santana]

W.T. HUH!?? hahahaha. You should have told him to jack-off!!!!!

[Frieda P]

I was waiting for that response, figures it'd be you! ;-)

[Rob Santana]

(evil grin)

[Relic]

Funny. haha

Hm, I wonder? Is there a tense issue here?

[Frieda P]

Whatever do you mean?

[Relic]

When you said my name

the sun rose in my loins

then you called me 'jack'

[Frieda P]

Sounds familiar.

[Relic]

Yeah, kinda. :)

[Frieda P]

That never actually happened to me, but a friend's cousin, i don't know which is worse, losing to another woman or a man...

[The Nude Writer]

Haha :) you're silly :) thanks for entertaining me

[Frieda P]

Ha, that's not even me, it's my evil twin. ;-)

[The Nude Writer]

Ooo I had an evil twin once. She was even more naked than me, if you could believe it!

[Frieda P]

Ha how does one get MORE naked? haha

[The Nude Writer]

You really don't want to know.. Hence the evil twin ;)

[Frieda P]

lol ok, I'll take your word for it ;-)

[The Nude Writer]

Hehe ok :)

[Horizon K.]

Wait, what! No! Hot guy, say MY name!

haha...lol

[Frieda P]

Thanks glad you liked it!

[PP]

Thank god he hasn't called you 'SISTER'! You've still got a chance Frieda lol

[Frieda P]

Eww Tink!

[Pax]

ha! a good laugh is always best medicine... and you've done it... the face of the dog is funny... just the way the girl narrator face should be.... lol... humor me more my friend.. :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure to humor you dear Pax, I like nothing more than to know I've made you smile. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I don't think I want the sun rising in my loins. That's gotta hurt.

[Frieda P]

Lol...it's too early to laugh this hard.