Etching My Mind

Midnight embraces, 

   moonlight walks

      twilight kisses

long talks til dawn

you fill my nights with rhapsody

when i hold you up to the sun

your enticing words whisper to me

bewitchingingly beckon,

          til they implode desire

days are hazy until dipped into dark

within the inky black I see you clearly

eyes wide open in anticipation

hearts meshing, bodies thrashing

taste of blood upon my lips,

etching my mind with lusty fingertips

melt your inscription upon my skin

whilst we share poetry of our souls

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I liked this a lot, but I have to tell you I can't stop laughing at my silly self because when I just glanced at the title in my RR queue it looked like it was called "Bitching My Mind" and I was like, FTW is she going to write about now?? xD So...very enticing write, but I did giggle my way through it ;-)

[Frieda P]

I can't stop laughing now, funny you should read 'bitching' when you see my name!! lol ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

Don't need to be Freud to figure that one out! xD

[Frieda P]

Bhahaha, that bit got you Featured!

[KAOlmsted]

Holy cats! :-D

[Pete Langley]

This sounds like a vampires` writing group drying their blood-written rhymes on the washing line after a night of creativity. Alternately..... Lovely ...I particularly liked "days are hazy until dipped into dark". P.

[Michael G.]

This has the slow easy movements of two lovers that know each other well, and are content in making the other enjoy the experience to their very best.

[Holly Mason]

etching my mind with lusty fingertips-I absolutely love that line and the imagery it brings
sharing the poetry of souls is a beautiful kiss at the end of a wonderful first date
thank you for sharing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always a passionate and well penned poem Frieda