Sea Swells

My muse was Star's lovely painting...

My thoughts drift 

             out to sea

like a lovely butterfly

 in flight

salt air fills my senses 

              with elation

i feel you breathe

                at the nape of my neck

your fingers stroking

            through my hair

my body dances

  like the peaks of waves

   Your strong hands awash

 over my breasts

heaving in surrender,

           as a sigh of Ecstasy rises

      sweet feather touch of  my petals

    like an ocean roar

ripples my pulse plunging

           deeper waves release

               

I dabble my soul into the florid

   tidal of our rapture

thoughts of your return

               turn my body deliquescent

     fiery flow like majestic crests

      swell within me

      

~etch our names in the timeless

 traces of hourglass sand~

Author's Note

Artwork by my lovely friend *Star*

Reviews

[quinfinn]

are you having a steamy week my love? this is positively filled with the essence of passionate embrace and divine sensuality. to quote one of my favorite actors "that's the stuff that dreams are made of" . it seems you are bent on making every man on here a quivering mass of steaming flesh....my toes are smoking, and they are too young to smoke! i love your passionate writes, miss posies!

[Frieda P]

ha, you always make me smile with your reviews my dear friend...smoking toes, now that I'd love to see....

[Todd Mc' Callough]

There are some very passionate themes embedded within this piece. the used of the lines:
like an ocean roar
ripples my pulse plunging
deeper waves release
seem to exhibit the journey one's soul goes through in the act of love. Very deep and emotional, this is the stuff of progress and definitely peaks one's interest.

[Frieda P]

I love your review, thanks so much for your insight, much appreciated George.

[Holly Mason]

very lovely write
artwork is beautiful but shines brighter with your graceful words
thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed it Holly, I'll let Star know too...thanks so much.

[Riley Mistwood]

lovely

[Frieda P]

Thanks for reading Riley.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and moving Frieda. This is some nice stuff. You seem to be able to use words to create life in perfect harmony.

[Frieda P]

Perfect harmoney, if only...thanks Jack!

[Baby Ricochet]

It's very pretty Frieda. Nice write

[Frieda P]

Thank you Baby.

[Pete Langley]

If I come back as a woman next time, Frieda, I just hope my hormones - and my pen - work as well as yours! Super stuff! P.

[Frieda P]

Ha, that made me smile...consider yourself squishy hugged! Thanks Pete.

[Pax]

a lovely painting that inspired such passionate poem.... a woman of grace and beauty dance in the words of loveliness...
a beautiful write!

[Frieda P]

What an exquisite review Pax, thank you kindly....

[Horizon K.]

my body dances
like the peaks of waves

And so many other lines here, so hot. The ocean is such a perfect metaphor for making love...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Horizon, I agree, the ocean is inspiring. Glad you enjoyed this....

[Barbara Walker]

Sensuous, sensual, without being pornographic. "My body dances like the peaks of waves" Love that line!

[Frieda P]

Seems to be a well liked line, thanks so much Barbara, much appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

A poem of divine dimension that is beyond ripples of beauty and love cascading down the hearts . You possess that majestic pen and the ever flowing passion of your kind heart... Always a pleasure reading your poems...:)

[Frieda P]

Wow, 'divine dimension' I'm going to savor that for quite some time! Thanks so much Sami, you're always so kind in your reviews. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)