Sea Swells

My muse was Star's lovely painting...

My thoughts drift 

             out to sea

like a lovely butterfly

 in flight

salt air fills my senses 

              with elation

i feel you breathe

                at the nape of my neck

your fingers stroking

            through my hair

my body dances

  like the peaks of waves

   Your strong hands awash

 over my breasts

heaving in surrender,

           as a sigh of Ecstasy rises

      sweet feather touch of  my petals

    like an ocean roar

ripples my pulse plunging

           deeper waves release

               

I dabble my soul into the florid

   tidal of our rapture

thoughts of your return

               turn my body deliquescent

     fiery flow like majestic crests

      swell within me

      

~etch our names in the timeless

 traces of hourglass sand~

Author's Note

Artwork by my lovely friend *Star*

Reviews

[quinfinn]

are you having a steamy week my love? this is positively filled with the essence of passionate embrace and divine sensuality. to quote one of my favorite actors "that's the stuff that dreams are made of" . it seems you are bent on making every man on here a quivering mass of steaming flesh....my toes are smoking, and they are too young to smoke! i love your passionate writes, miss posies!

[Frieda P]

ha, you always make me smile with your reviews my dear friend...smoking toes, now that I'd love to see....

[Forgotten]

A poem filled with such vivid imagery, it's amazing your style of writing and how fluidly it seems to pen. Great write Frieda!

[Frieda P]

You just made my day Forgotten, thanks! :-)

[lee von cleef]

Who is the guy just bought a carton of lucky Strikes?

[Frieda P]

Ha Lucky Strikes, are they still around?

[lee von cleef]

pall mall, Chesterfield...... Separation anxiety,,, you are a naughty poet.

[Frieda P]

Naughty but nice. ;-)

[icelandicblue]

Beautiful poem, both figuratively and literally. This is one passionate write. You have such eloquence of expression.

[Frieda P]

Thank you, so happy you liked this one icelandicblue.

[s y e]

Wow, the artwork is amazing!! She is truly talented, as are you with your poetry.

This was amazing. I loved it!

[Frieda P]

I know she's amazing, I'll let her know, thanks farfalle!!

[s y e]

Anytime hun! xo

[Androglossia]

There is a prolonged pensive need and anticipation on the lines just like the expressive thoughtfulness that seems to show on that woman in the painting.

[Frieda P]

So delighted you picked up on that Maryanne, thanks for your insightful review.

[KeelyJane]

A lovely well penned piece as usual. Its always a pleasure. :)

[Frieda P]

Always a pleasure to have you read me Keely, thanks.

[PP]

What mood are we in today??? I can feel it drift to the exotic and erotic! Love this one..the title, the artwork and everything..PERFECT!

[Frieda P]

Whoa...nice review! I'll let Star know too, she'll be delighted, thanks Tink, you're the best! :-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

First of all, I love the artwork, very Ethereal...It compliments your piece... I feel the tender moment of passion and the connection of the sea's rapture.. Gorgeous write Frieda~~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the gorgeous review Robbie, I will let her know too, she'll be thrilled. xoxo

[Lover Of Words]

Very hot nicely done Mrs Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kelsey.