'They' Say...

'They' Say...

A Poem by Frieda P
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Senryu

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I thought it was true...

'they' say you can have it all,

who the fook is 'they'?? 



© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Image courtesy of Benji on my birthday, had to write a little snarky ditty for it....

Thanks Steve! x

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Oh dear, I feel so guilty now for not getting to this piece sooner...I WAS looking for this one though if you know what I mean...if that's not Frieda, I don't know who is ;D I'm so glad you were able to relate to this pic...

And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door,
She cried to me, "Hey, why not ask for more?"

Haven't quoted HIM in a little while huh? I was due ;) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Hey it wasn't just the pic that reminded me of you ;) xo
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I got that part, now do you have a light?! ;-) x
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

I always have a light, you got a smoke? ;) xo



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Fook sake I am going to start a protest against fracking. Instead of the 'F' word I am going to use Frack and Fracking! Nice little ditty though.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Whichever F word floats your boat Gabriel! Thanks :-)
Snarky it is then! Would have used 'are' in the last line but another nice little piece to fill our thoughts. You are certainly back as are Noodles, Jack and Red. My RR is not up to date these past days lol!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha, snarky hardly needs to be proper John, thanks, and who's being snarky now? ;-P
only THEY know who they are..and quite frankly, only THEY care

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

They are sorry they messed with you! Thanks Dave. :-)
Yup who is they? Great little ditty this is

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks TL, someone just rubbed me the wrong way by saying 'they'... :-)
Who, indeed. "They" are the ones who tell us we must have long flowing blonde hair and tatas til Tuesday if we are to find love; "They" tell us that so many unattainable lies, and yet never show "their" faces... Good one here, Frieda! We seem to be on a similar wavelength tonight...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh brother, looks like you're in trouble Rita, thanks, love the tatas til Tuesday!! Lol :-)
They Say...I thought he was an oriental philosopher or something.

Very funny Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

'They' never say that about me, thanks Jack....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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