~Fools Rush In

Fools Rush In...

You rushed in like the fool tide
changed the entire heart scape,
then completely ebbed away...

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

ugh frieda how is one supposed to respond to this?! it's good an well written, and the message is clear and effective but there is no way to pleasantly review it! other than using the cliched wowsers on you again lol. good job, impossible to review on, despite the fact i just did..

[Frieda P]

Laughing here Jen, I think you did a pretty good job of it, thanks :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome...why do my obscure reviews get the features?

[icelandicblue]

A lovely image with sad results. Love is an ocean of regret.

[Frieda P]

You said a mouthful there Anne, thanks.

[S C]

Short and sweet. :) Great job!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sera! :-)

[Keith]

Great metaphor, exactly how many romances go.

[Frieda P]

Yes, unfortunately, thanks Keith.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...simply beautiful...the graphic complimented your words perfectly!

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed Kelly, thanks so much....how's your brother doing?

[Kelly Scheppers]

The morning before he was scheduled to have his leg amputated to the knee, the vascular surgeon discovered that the staff infection had completely cleared...all the tissue was healthy! I am bound to believe it was the power of prayer, and we are all so very thankful! Thank you for asking, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Wow, Oh wow, that's so great, I have goosebumps!!

[Tom]

Imaginatively put indeed! An absolute bounder whoever it was !

[Frieda P]

'Bounder' I like that, exactly, thanks Tom!

[Tom]

Apologies Frieda, fixed my grammar up above there now ! Should read better....

[SyberRose]

Sort of like a kiss and tell ha...nicely done Frieda...but seriously it is sad when that happens...Rose

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rose, glad you enjoyed.

[MikeV]

That is some deep writing my friend!
I loved it! :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Mike! :-)

[Jack...]

As long as you enjoyed your day in the sun, then I guess this could be a good thing. Lovely my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Smiling here.....you said it, or wait....ha, thanks Jack.

[Mark]

Very nice. I love poems about love and the ocean.

[Frieda P]

....and not a zephyr in sight, thanks Mark ;-)

[Mark]

hahaha :P