Being a math person by necessiy, not by choice, I can completely identify with this one, Frieda, and know it is a bad situation - a great subject for a very bad poem. lol When numbers dominate your waking hours, it's very hard to fit those words somewhere in between. Good luck with the contest!
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11 Years Ago
Oh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words an.. read moreOh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words any day...thanks, ha, I guess I hope I don't win, I'm not sure...lol
11 Years Ago
You certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to t.. read moreYou certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to the very young, "Bad" means "Good" so if you're young at heart and you win you can just smile and say you misinterpreted the sponsor's intent and purposely wrote a very good poem, which of course, you did. So, see, win or lose you can still keep smiling! Sleep well.
How Cool! I don't think this is bad poetry at all! So many rich words in each line. It's better than finding the prize in a crackerjack box! =D I could totally see this as a witches lament, just before her Brew Stew Exam! Ha ha!
F...loved it. Snapapsis...I think you may have meant 'synapsis' but who really cares...a new word perhaps for a poem so deep I may need a scuba tank. Made me smile...bobc
Haha you're kidding right? Yes, I did, have no clue how that got away from me, but as you said who .. read moreHaha you're kidding right? Yes, I did, have no clue how that got away from me, but as you said who really cares, it's a mess....
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Not kidding about loving it. The fact that it is incomprehensible and completely opaque and intentio.. read moreNot kidding about loving it. The fact that it is incomprehensible and completely opaque and intentionally so, just makes it for me. BTW...the word I think you were looking for was actually 'synapses' (a junction between two nerve cells) rather than 'synapsis' (the fusion of chromosome pairs at the start of meiosis). Then again...I'm still enjoying this...bobc
11 Years Ago
At this point I don't know what I mean anymore...hahah thanks.
Being a math person by necessiy, not by choice, I can completely identify with this one, Frieda, and know it is a bad situation - a great subject for a very bad poem. lol When numbers dominate your waking hours, it's very hard to fit those words somewhere in between. Good luck with the contest!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Oh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words an.. read moreOh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words any day...thanks, ha, I guess I hope I don't win, I'm not sure...lol
11 Years Ago
You certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to t.. read moreYou certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to the very young, "Bad" means "Good" so if you're young at heart and you win you can just smile and say you misinterpreted the sponsor's intent and purposely wrote a very good poem, which of course, you did. So, see, win or lose you can still keep smiling! Sleep well.
How did you create such fanciful, wild images with that word list? I feel like I've looked through the rabbit hole with this one. You are a clever cookie, Frieda!
Love the captcha...
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11 Years Ago
This one wasn't easy, I don't write well under constraints that's why I challenge myself with a Senr.. read moreThis one wasn't easy, I don't write well under constraints that's why I challenge myself with a Senryu every so often, this was my third try, I was ready to pack it in, but I said hey it's supposed to be bad. Lol, thanks Rita!
O Pity patter of pemtamiter tipped the hat and the waiter over the edge and the bed tooo. ( now that is bad)
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11 Years Ago
Hahah you try making poetry out of fiscal flamingos my good man, see what you come up with! ;-P
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Bobbing desk bound
gravities glass my shroud
pink water and feather on my ars.
Ju.. read moreBobbing desk bound
gravities glass my shroud
pink water and feather on my ars.
Just up the down.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..