You Asked For It....bad poetry

You Asked For It....bad poetry

A Poem by Frieda P
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~for the creative bad poetry contest, you asked for bad poetry, you got it. ;-)

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The apathetic aptitude of numbers had left me color blind
the physics foretold were discombobulating to me, a student
studying with fiscal frustrated madness,  a math wizard in disguise
paint by numbers of the brain was above my pay grade

Random synapses
 fired subliminally in my mind,
like  holograhic sputtering of gray matter'd egghead tissue
unattractive in umbered hues of brown, I wrapped my pen around
flamingo pinks & eel glow green instead,  for they were floating in my head


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P
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Being a math person by necessiy, not by choice, I can completely identify with this one, Frieda, and know it is a bad situation - a great subject for a very bad poem. lol When numbers dominate your waking hours, it's very hard to fit those words somewhere in between. Good luck with the contest!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words an.. read more
Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

You certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to t.. read more



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gotta be a first prize dear...eel green indeed...made me laugh before the sun comes up...great job and thank you!
E.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Laughing here with you, so if it wins that means it's really bad right? ha, you can't win with this .. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Years Ago

can't win for loosing for sure...love and joy dumplin'
E.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ain't that the truth, enjoy your weekend E!
Standing ovation! Bravo freida bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

koty bell

11 Years Ago

Hell ya they have cookies! :-)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Lotz of cookies by the look of it lol.............
koty bell

11 Years Ago

haha but in all seriousness great poem freida... It was the farthest thing from bad... :-)
This is really cool actually, an enjoyable piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

If you like bad poetry, ha, thanks Zahra.
Hahahahaha. That's bad. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Which is it Pryde? ha..................
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

Both since your goal was to be bad.
this is probably a one star rating...

just kidding!

You are a creative wiz...nice work....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm still trying to figure out if that's good or bad, ha, thanks so much Art!
I think I feel a migraine coming on!! Frieda, I'm afraid you have discombobulated my sensory receptors in a most ambiguous way! OMG, girlie friend, this is a MUST WIN!



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL eat some Chunky Monkey and call me in the morning! ;-)
Kelly Scheppers

11 Years Ago

...gotcha! ; )
It's really not that bad pickle, I don't think you can win a bad poetry contest with this :( I was thinking more along the lines of "It was a hot and sunny day, a pickle came our way, but things went sour when we tried to share her shower and then sweet pickles ran away" kind of bad poetry, I might enter that :P
I bet I could win with that :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

11 Years Ago

yeah exactly it, pickle can't write bad poetry.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh believe me, I can...you just don't get to read those.... ;-P
Corset

11 Years Ago

aha! ok then I'll have to take your word for it if you insist on it ;op
"paint by numbers of the brain was above my pay grade"

YOU ARE FREAKING GENIUS. lol you couldn't write bad poetry if your life depended on it!

On a more serious note. This is so freaking terrible I can't even rate it. Forgive me. ;)




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hey I know it's bad, no sugar coating that xx
Muse

11 Years Ago

I was kidding about that too. ;) xx
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know ;-P xo
There's a bad poetry contest??? LMAO!!
This is fresh, Frieda! ha ha! Well penned, girl! :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

Oh I have some baaaad poetry... I mean REAL crap! LOL
You spun this one like a pro, Friedalici.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh don't we all, that never sees the light of day, especially not the cafe, woo I just rhymed LOL ;-.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

such a poet! ;D
Um, huh? An absolutely psychedelic piece of work my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, I was just following the instructions, it wasn't hard to write bad poetry with those word choice.. read more

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