Being a math person by necessiy, not by choice, I can completely identify with this one, Frieda, and know it is a bad situation - a great subject for a very bad poem. lol When numbers dominate your waking hours, it's very hard to fit those words somewhere in between. Good luck with the contest!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words an.. read moreOh, I don't know how you do it Joyce, me and numbers have a hate/hate relationship, give me words any day...thanks, ha, I guess I hope I don't win, I'm not sure...lol
11 Years Ago
You certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to t.. read moreYou certainly have a point about winning that contest, unless you think of the word "Bad" - now to the very young, "Bad" means "Good" so if you're young at heart and you win you can just smile and say you misinterpreted the sponsor's intent and purposely wrote a very good poem, which of course, you did. So, see, win or lose you can still keep smiling! Sleep well.
Laughing here with you, so if it wins that means it's really bad right? ha, you can't win with this .. read moreLaughing here with you, so if it wins that means it's really bad right? ha, you can't win with this contest E. ;-)
11 Years Ago
can't win for loosing for sure...love and joy dumplin'
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I think I feel a migraine coming on!! Frieda, I'm afraid you have discombobulated my sensory receptors in a most ambiguous way! OMG, girlie friend, this is a MUST WIN!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
LOL eat some Chunky Monkey and call me in the morning! ;-)
It's really not that bad pickle, I don't think you can win a bad poetry contest with this :( I was thinking more along the lines of "It was a hot and sunny day, a pickle came our way, but things went sour when we tried to share her shower and then sweet pickles ran away" kind of bad poetry, I might enter that :P
I bet I could win with that :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Hahaha are you drinking too, it's not pickle poetry, it's bad poetry, and you have all the wrong wor.. read moreHahaha are you drinking too, it's not pickle poetry, it's bad poetry, and you have all the wrong words, there were no pickles on that menu. ;-P
"paint by numbers of the brain was above my pay grade"
YOU ARE FREAKING GENIUS. lol you couldn't write bad poetry if your life depended on it!
On a more serious note. This is so freaking terrible I can't even rate it. Forgive me. ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I'm seriously laughing my a*s off here, somehow it sounds funnier when you say it LOL Wait, what par.. read moreI'm seriously laughing my a*s off here, somehow it sounds funnier when you say it LOL Wait, what part were you serious about? ;-) hahaha
11 Years Ago
lol this poem is below my pay grade...I don't get paid enough to review stuff like this. lmao
11 Years Ago
LOL................I think I just snorted. ;-D
11 Years Ago
love you and your work. I was kidding as always. xx
Oh I have some baaaad poetry... I mean REAL crap! LOL
You spun this one like a pro, Friedalici.. read moreOh I have some baaaad poetry... I mean REAL crap! LOL
You spun this one like a pro, Friedalicious! ;)
11 Years Ago
Oh don't we all, that never sees the light of day, especially not the cafe, woo I just rhymed LOL ;-.. read moreOh don't we all, that never sees the light of day, especially not the cafe, woo I just rhymed LOL ;-) xoxox
Um, huh? An absolutely psychedelic piece of work my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Ha, I was just following the instructions, it wasn't hard to write bad poetry with those word choice.. read moreHa, I was just following the instructions, it wasn't hard to write bad poetry with those word choices, although you wrapped your pen around it quite aptly...!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..