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Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.

Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.

And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.

[Frieda P]

Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!

[Chris]

This was a pretty one... to me.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Chris, means a lot....

[Rod Dangers]

Loved the use of language and the layout of this piece.
Effortless to read and very much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your sweet review Rod, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Talesha]

Tooo lovely.This is so soothing and amazing.It makes me want to commune with nature even move.Love where you draw your inspiration. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Talesha, so glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

[Tam Warink]

This seems a deadly mix for a gaze into the morning mist. I lift the cup to my lips and then sip... in a moment there is this sense of "toxic intoxication and blush'd smoke" that seems to leave the mind riven. I lift my cup again to this...

100 cherry mysts

[Frieda P]

Always jazz'd by your poetic responses Tam, thanking you muchly through blush'd smoke and intoxication's toxins. ;-)

[Tam Warink]

I can see it. Perhaps goes well with pickled ginger.

[Frieda P]

You always make me hungry...pickled ginger is just my cuppa tea....

[Ahena MK]

Muchly enjoyed
:)
Ahena ..

[Frieda P]

Ha muchly appreciate your review, thanks Ahena! ;-)

[Leigh]

What a lovely thought to want to make the most of every available space, very romantic

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leigh, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.

[SAYED THANGAL]

as the morning, the mixture of sound and colour, the poem gives a special effect upon readers

[Frieda P]

Thanks sayed, glad it took you there...

[Vidya Bacchus]

We should love like this.Your words paint pretty, pretty pictures:P

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed my drippy watercolors Vidya ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes Freida my dear I much enjoyed your painting with your pen:)

[Frieda P]

Sometimes Mistress Viperpants does pretty too. ;-) hahaha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha as long as yo don't piss her off :P

[Frieda P]

Hahaha you'd have a death wish. ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Not I my friend .I am backing away slowly now :P

[Frieda P]

Oh my, people are going to think I'm really wicked. MWHAHAHAHA ;-P

[Vidya Bacchus]

They need only read your poems to know you are a sweetheart :P

[Frieda P]

Oh don't get that rumor started, I'll lose my joisey standing....hahaha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha my lips are sealed :P

[Rachelle]

Beautiful fusion of words.... I have yet to reach this stage when I can go beyond technical and scientific and into the imaginative and emotional.... In my world, everything is numbers and facts.

[Lyn Anderson]

Your softer side makes me feel all warm and gooey. Seriously, this is really good, with your own particular blend that is this mix of vocabulary, rhythm, and well placed apostrophes. Ha! Given my own proclivities it is amazing I can read your stuff without going mad. It is always a pleasure to see a little more of your heart.

[Frieda P]

Ha this made me smile, have you had therapy for those proclivities hon, never seen anyone so possessed with apostrophes. Thanks, really appreciate your kind words jazz'd you enjoyed my softer side my friend!

[Lyn Anderson]

Therapy for apostrophobia - sounds like a poem to me!

[Frieda P]

Hahaha I'm sure you'll write it toot sweet!

[Lyn Anderson]

Done before I read your comment my love

[Frieda P]

Why doesn't that surprise me?