Stick a fork in it ~

Stick a fork in it ~

A Poem by Frieda P

You had a little sip & nibble
 of my generous spirits,
 you stay'd for tea & honey, 
helped yourself to cookies too
 Evening came, we feasted, 
seem'd a perfect pairing, 
match made in Hell's kitchen
you lov'd my spicy ignited cookin'
I craved some 
affectation's desserts...

When night dawn'd,
 you slipp'd into my cream puff'd darkness, 
had a taste of my suffering,
 you were out the back door 
before I could even say

~ stick a fork in it

© 2014 Frieda P


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Let's just hope the fool didn't let the door hit him in the arse on the way out. Nice to see some humor on this dreary afternoon and who better to serve it up but you my friend. I don't know though...with a dinner menu like that, and a sweet dessert, I know I'd want to stick around and see what was for breakfast.

Once again, it doesn't matter what the subject...your poetry always comes with the amazing tag.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh you know Jack, I run out of my medication by Friday, just thought I'd write something snarky...ja.. read more



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Unfortunately that holds true too many times but, ...good riddins!
Your wordplay is awesome...totally awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Ouch...not sure sticking a fork in it will help. I guess some would like to.

Posted 10 Years Ago


When night dawn'd,
you slipp'd into my cream puff'd darkness,
had a taste of my suffering,
you were out the back door
before I could even say

~ stick a fork in it

Yep … once they get what they want. Even today, these men are out there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


well written Frieda, i enjoyed this one. that sense of humour will definitely get you everywhere, lovely poem indeed :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha gotta have a sense of humor or might as well pack it in, thanks muchly cycy! ;-)
What an inhospitable guest...you need a sign for that kind of person!! And maybe a gun...borrow mine! Forgot this one earlier so thought id make it my last review of the night. Love the sarcasm and humor here...oh and the music!! xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I know, really...pfft! Ha, thanks Red, love the music too. x
This is very appetizing ! You're serving a different menu here. I'm glad I tried to stop by at this store... I mean site. I hope i won't get a heartburn. LOL

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Hahaha, stop in anytime Neil ;-)
Heh, this made me grin. Awesome! :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks was just having a little Frieday night fun. ;-)
Giggling here, Frieda - starting with "helped yourself to cookies too..." ;)

Sometimes after spooning, we are stabbed in the back and we must demand that he gets the fork outta there... (sorry - it's been a looong week!)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What?? I meant chocolate chip ;-) Ha, I like how you word'd that! Why didn't I think of the spooi.. read more
Hahaha Nothing beats Mrs.R's spicy ignited cookin'...except for maybe cream puff'd darkness...love that album as well ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Haha Of course ;) Yep just reading this piece kills my appetite for any non-Mrs.R-related delicacie.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Hahaha, you're too funny Benji ;-)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Hahaha I try Mrs.R ;P
Funny one. A good write Frieda, enjoyed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille noodlehead.
s y e

10 Years Ago

No bother.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Who are you and what did you do with my noodlebumble> ?

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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