Mindfield's windowpain...‏

~or insomniatic delusions

Peer out the frosty crack'd windowpain 

translucent poetry in fractured hand

vintage thoughts rise from a steam'd

    cuppa emphatic billowing overtures

prelude to the days's negotiations

darkly processing as ink bleeds

  out through  cynical purse'd lips 

   embers of dark eye's glean'd glow

mind field's traffic steadily high-season'd

   blinking lights dimly reflect'd thunder

       gingerly flavor'd pungency's flair

smacking on a charm'd lick of despair

   speculating rain'd on parades chagrin 

put on another pot of stimulating spirits

    peppering a racy melodious harmony

pen'd a snappy sparkle with a bite

  left out on a din'd windowsill overnight

hullabaloo's brouhaha made a boisterous clatter

   bedlam nearly snared the disquiet of will's disposition

dancing moon lover's save another testament'd hue

  witness'd by evidence within a cafe's smoky allusions

covenant's bargain within the scheme of another frosted avenue

    forced to whittle time in disguise flying above landscape'd rhyme

sword'd dilemma's cut another frothy fizzling perspective

    twilight closes illusion's blinds on facades picturesque view

  delusion's of a torture'd poet stirring in frenzy's  flurry never slumbers

Author's Note

Reviews

[Shirlena]

and these just roll off of you don't they...Girl you know you are a force in your own right or should I say write because it's all of those things and then some but I love it, keep 'em coming cause trust me I will get to every one of them. One of my biggest thrills is to get to read great poetry and you are one of the BESTest Frieda :).

[Frieda P]

Woo, someone scrap me off the ceiling! Thanks, you just made my day, or my week probably! Thanks muchly ;-)

[redflutterby]

This is definitely insomnia....the mind twisted and turned...churning over thoughts and ideas. Every little stresser working its way like a steel splinter into your head. Turbulence and disruption jostles rational thinking...causing everything to appear skewed and out of whack. Not a great way to be but it often produces some of the best works.

This is a fantastic poem...x

[Frieda P]

Thanks Red, hard to say at this point, since hardly sleeping, so it feels like this most often times...yep skew'd and out of whack! ;-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Always love reading your master pieces Frieda! ;-) Another outstanding poem.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

I'm gonna have to start sending you regular checks ;-) Thanks so much Kazie.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Hahahaha! You very welcome Frieda. :-D

[Anand Sehgal]

translucent poetry :) :0) surreal :) :)

[Frieda P]

Tis what happens when you don't sleep haha ;-) Grazie mille Anand.

[Anand Sehgal]

ha ha.. but it was indeed a good write :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Anand, muchly appreciated. :-)

[A. Amos]

FP I always enjoy reading you as you allowed your readers to enter your mind and sense your soul, this again is simply amazing work. Congrat on such a wonderful job.....

[Frieda P]

Enthralled by your response A, thanks so much, probably the best compliment a poet could hear.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear friend

[Scott Metro]

A zig-zagging of the gray matter.
Spin cycle poetry..
fast and furious..

Well done
Scott

[Frieda P]

Ha, exactly what it felt like too....'spin cycle poetry' is that a real thingy? ;-) Grazie mille Scott.

[Scott Metro]

it is now....

[Frieda P]

Ha....me LIKE. ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice title. Caught my attention. I like the poetry lately. A different level and tone for you. I like the new poetry. This is the kind of poetry I like. Need to be read and took apart. Illusion's can make us feel unstable and confused. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, so pleased that you do, always appreciate your thoughts.

[Lyn Anderson]

You had me with the song, first off, and then the tremendous write. Though I would have to question save'd and facade'd - it would seem neither requires an apostrophe as they are currently written ...:)

[Frieda P]

Great song, I know. Will take it under advisement apostrophe Gestapo, thanks so much ;-)

[Jack...]

Now this is definitely a poem that has tried to take the words from me...my mind is swirling at such dizzying speeds that collecting thoughts has become a dance in the dark...yet still finding the front of my vision comes the one word I seem to overuse always when reviewing your work sweet Frieda and that word is amazing.

You do manage to take my breath away on a consistent basis...but it feels so very good. And I can always breathe later. Sleepless beauty finds me this day.

[Frieda P]

Join the club Jack, my mind was whirling at dizzying speeds when I wrote this, thanks so much, you always humble me with your kind words my friend.

[Jack...]

Hopefully it slows down soon

[Shirlena]

Oh wow Frieda Jack closed his profile. I wonder why? He is one of my favorites too. Awwww.