~ dancing in delirium's breath

Lost my grip of sanity one prolific twilight

  awash in splendiferous grandeur

wrapped in fiery heat of your verse's bliss

 i drink from its' licentious magical fountain

    breathless, you sent me swooning

ecstasy of bursting stars

   dancing in symbiotic motion

upon harmonious whirling moons 

   prancing in the danger of your toxic sublimity

     absymal profundity sharp as sword strokes

 sinful soul's zestfulness

          strapp'd in hysteria's restraints  

 derangement under a hypnotic spell,

          felicitously breathing in delirium

pain and pleasure of a  paradisiacal tonic,

             aching in this fix'd addiction

you invoke my sweet psycho

             touched by your trenchant reality

immerse'd me in your marinating juices

         if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce

savoring this tangy nectar'd oblivion

                  dancing amidst crazed fever's tumult

endlessly luxuriating in your poetic frenzy

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Heat emanates from your lines and my mind is dipping and whirling along with each word. Theirs a sense of frenzied lust here. A complete loss of composure and control...a stripping away of the niceties. The entire last stanza blew my skirt up and off!! No strawberries needed.... can't go out for a smoke though. ;-pxo

[Frieda P]

Wooo your words are sweet like a chic-a-cherry cola ;-) Ha, thought you had feetie pj's on today thanks hon! xo

[redflutterby]

Just under my skirt!! Lmao...post another peppery piece and I might be dancing in my flannel panties!! Hahaha... ;-D

[Frieda P]

Oh I have one coming dear, stuck in delirium last night...have your f**s at the ready hahah ;-)

[redflutterby]

Lol... uh oh....thanks for the warning!! Maybe I need some alcohol too...hahaha!!

[Frieda P]

Ha make it a stiff one ;-) hahaha

[redflutterby]

Hahaha....always do!!!

[A. Amos]

FP this is simply chill out read and elegantly sensual and savage garden song goes perfectly fine! Bravo

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much A, I just like singing ~Sweet like a chic-a-cherry cola , jazz'd you enjoyed! ;-)

[A. Amos]

Chic-a-cherry cola great:) you're most welcome

[Tina Louise UK]

Brilliant piece, loved it :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tia, jazz'd you enjoyed :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well Freida this one is on fire .I just love this I tell you girl "whew "

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Vidya, I could sure use a little fire today, freezing my tuchus off...

[Vidya Bacchus]

I hear you chica :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I love when you call me chica ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I aim to please for sure lol

[Jack...]

I looked up the word “enchant” in Webster’s II New Riverside University Dictionary and this is what I found:

Enchant

Verb

1.to subject to magical influence; bewitch

2. to delight to a high degree

3. to impart a magic quality or effect to.

Wouldn’t it be easier to just say “Frieda’s Poetry?”


My friend, you always shine so brightly upon our hearts. You do enchant me as I always am bewitched by your magical and amazing poetry. Beautifully penned.

[Frieda P]

HA! I love it, I think this is my favorite review of all time Jack! Giggling like a silly school girl....thanks so much my sweet friend. ;-)

[Avinash]

God is missing an angel of love up there.... :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm pretty sure he put up a 'no trespassing' sign on some of my poetry, thanks Avinash ;-)

[Scott Metro]

immerse'd me in your marinating juices....a bit of a turn on.
Nice rendering Frieda.

Enjoyed it
Scotty

[Frieda P]

Poetry indeed turns me on, wouldn't you agree? Not about me, you? ha ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Yes....some days are like that..!!
S.

[gabrielle]

The word choices made me think of...love making..with words.. ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh I love where your mind went gabrielle, thanks muchly my friend ;-)

[MAC]

you completely had me on the opening line...the rest was brilliant. forgive me but I seem to have forgotten how talented you are. and you are!

[Frieda P]

Woo, now I'm dancing to your review, thanks so much Mark, you made my morning!

[MAC]

Frieda, I wish I could please everybody I knew so easily :) have a wonderful day!

[Lyn Anderson]

Very sleek, sexy, and so you ... goodmorning ...:)

[Frieda P]

Not sure how to take that dear ;-) ha...Bonjour! Got snow?