Just a silly rhyme....sort of

It's satire people, lighten up ;-)

My life was never meant to rhyme

nor a stitch in time

although i do have rhythmy blues

metaphorically speaking, i sure can tap those shoes

give me prose any day of the week,

and I can certainly turn it bleak

frays upside down and sideways

that's the house specialty craze

my maze'd poetic verse 

is strictly unrehearsed,

prancing delusions

of uttermost confusion

if you're discombobulated,  kerfuffl'd

or bewilder'd,  join the cafe's allusions

 I told you I couldn't rhyme!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your words have rhythm and beat, who needs rhyme...seldom use it myself unless it is natural...but then there are those purists who believe form has to be followed always..

oh well...can't please all the people all the time...

and my poetry reflects my life for sure...not much rhyme...and at times the rhythm goes off like a bad song.

[Frieda P]

Thanks jacob, yep some people have strict rules about this poetry stuff, can't please em all is right.

[kublakhan27]

Haha Great work Mrs.R, it's nice to see you unleash your sense of humour once in a while ;) xo

[Frieda P]

I wrote it just so you'd smile at least once today Benji! ;-D

[kublakhan27]

Haha And you succeeded Mrs.R ;D xo

[Frieda P]

Wooo, good, now read this ten times tonight ha ;-P xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha or ten times an hour...I'll read it a lot either way haha ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Ha that felt like a big ol' wet one hey ;-) x

[kublakhan27]

Haha Indeed Mrs.R ;) xo

[redzone]

yep, lighten up and just kiss my a*s.. perfecto!!! rhymy schymy.. and who the fook is the captcha anyway??? but it can kiss my.. er.. marvelous arse!! ok Frieda fling the satire!!! ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Ha captcha is a clever smartass that's for sure!

[Annabelle Lee]

Oh my goodness, Frieda P
You never cease to amaze me
You write wonders all the time
And your lyrical verses seldom rhyme
But I love to read you anyway
Your style is something that can take me away.
:p
great way to say it, Frieda

[Frieda P]

Ha I knew you'd like this snarky one ;-P

[Lyn Anderson]

I dig it. You covered a lot of bases here. And yeah, I get it -- the not rhyming deal, and the own style, and of course, the kiss my a*s if you don't dig it too.

[Frieda P]

Ha yeah I love it when people say you can't rhyme honey, no s**t Sherlock! ;-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This one made me giggle. :]

[Frieda P]

Good, mission accomplished! ;-)

[redflutterby]

Whoohooo.....love this one!! I was snapping my fingers to it and reading aloud!! Love the last five lines and the pic...Amen on that hun!! Lol.... thanks for the laugh. Much needed today.

[Frieda P]

Thought we needed to lighten up a bit, thanks Red, carry on. ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh, Frieda - you can indeed rhyme, though free verse fits you like a glove. :)

although i do have rhythmy blues - Love it!

[Frieda P]

Ha hardly Rita, but grazie! ;-)

[Scott Metro]

I love it......yes....


Scott

[Frieda P]

Kiss my arse Scoot, that means grazie ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Cool.....love Nugent's attitude also....
:)
S.

[Frieda P]

Ha I know, you'd think he was from joisey ;-)

[s y e]

Holy shyte Mama F, you rhymed! :O SHOCKER! I should go put it on the Noodle news, ahahaha.

Loved this one, definitely made me laugh!

laughing here, nice one.................!

[Frieda P]

Ha a wee bit, it sure wasn't easy peasy lemon squeezy as some people make it seem ;-P

[s y e]

LMAO! It's not easy................

[Frieda P]

When I rhyme it always sound contrived, I"m amazed when people can make it flow...I know!

[s y e]

Yours flowed...... you're better than me gurl!

[Frieda P]

That was a total fluke, don't expect it to happen ever again ha

[s y e]

Oh bummer, I think it might happen again.... I feel it in me bones, lass!