poeticisms' idiosyncrasies

poeticisms' idiosyncrasies in cataclysmic upheaval

  lacking colors luster'd of unclustered hypothesis

cloistered baubles & bubbles that never take flight

depletion of vapor'd waters that never quench an aching thirst

hallelujah birds singing off key in the minor of F#'s key

tenuous words can't escape in just the right melodic tune

tripping over close'd circuit unmastered tendencies

fields on fire without a storm's assault reign

my head stuck in clouds of darkly captive poesy

stuck like crazy glue in my mind's redundant  

poeticisms ~

Author's Note

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You talk to me a lot about using big words Mrs.R...I don't believe you can say those things anymore without including yourself in the conversation ;) The more I read you, the more elaborate your vocabulary gets, while never diminishing the strength of you voice of course. You're still Frieda the poet, no matter what you write. Your style is unmistakable. This sounds a lot to me like own feelings when I'm having difficulty writing something. Of course, you just nail it here, just like you nail every subject you take on. You are a true master of the form. You can say all you want about talent on my part, but believe me, if I had a smidgeon of the talent you have, I'd be content :) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha Benji, are you giving Mrs R a hard time? You know I adore words, if this was a math site, I'd have flunked out a long time ago. ;-) Thanks so much my sweet friend, you humble me with your kind words! xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha No hard time at all Mrs.R, just an observation ;) Always a pleasure my love :) xo

[redzone]

Going thru my RRs and read before but didn't comment...so correcting this horrid mistake... Frieda, lack color,tripping over close'd circuit unmastered tendencies???? Are we talking the same Frieda that I know?? Well all I want to say is if you, the mistress of "poeticisms' idiosyncrasies' are stuck for words, then I am the queen of England... and if this is true why are you not bowing down?? HA!!! ;0) I would actually love to see you tongue tied (poetically speaking)as it is my personal belief to be impossible.

I don't think I have read a poet who can dig into reality the way you do with images and metaphor and have it explore wonderfully the myriad of aspects within a single theme the way you do Frieda. So sadly (?) I'm not the queen of England and often finding myself bowing down to your poetry... and apologizing for taking so long in telling you....
~~redzone

[Tai Ryens]

Redundant thoughts that are the topic of poems with a recurring concept, the lack of inspiration and the inability of words to fly, as well as poetry's oddities erupting violently yet lacking color, and the hypothesis not well thought out . . . It sounds like you write of a case of writer's block, and you portray it ever so eloquently. Well done, indeed.

[Tai Ryens]

One more! I love the birds that sing beautifully, just in an off-tune manner. That one aspect was one of my favorite lines from here.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A mesh of the divine and squalid, well done, a great piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Thomas.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lady ,you have quite the mouth on you lol.Your vocabulary always leaves me bamboozled.

[Frieda P]

Oh I love that word 'bamboozled' grazie ;-)

[icelandicblue]

Finding that tune and then hoping we can find another. Poets are searchers, adventurers and navigators I think.

[Frieda P]

I concur Anne, always afraid of losing the way, and not having another thought to jot down...

[Tina Louise UK]

As always you astound..a brilliant piece! :) x

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Tia :-) x

[Dhaye]

Every poet has his own style...so we can say he has his own identity...and sometimes...uniqueness.
Some can easily make pieces in just some minutes. Some are good in word choice.
You are full of enthusiasm in writing and reading poems.
Redundant poeticisms? I think there's none...
Nice poem, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dhaye, and I concur, so many different styles and genres, just sometimes feel as though I'm saying the same thing over and over again...that goes round in my head.

[Dhaye]

Are you pissed off? LOL. I also do the same...but I understand poets have a certain theme for a period of time...depending on their muse to make a piece. Readers should understand that...You should be guilty when you post the same poem over and over again...same title...same content. But there's none...Let the theme enjoy the carrousel ride inside your mind while the readers enjoy your creativity. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha I'm in a perpetual state of piss'd off, that's how we roll in joisey LOL, seriously, thanks for the pep talk, I just took a deep breath. ;-)

[Cassie]

I like how your words always stick on your mind. This is really good my friend.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sunshine, muchly appreciated.

[writing mojo]

Your filler of such exquisite language has me busting my chops for such an ingest to phonic ally with quivers..excellent piece

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much mojo, always love to hear your thoughts.

[m.s.early]

i often come to your poems and look for something to critique but never find anything to offer as helpful suggestion other than, keep the faith.

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks xavier, I could say the same for you my friend.