Irony's peccadillo refrain Kublakhan/Frieda Production

Bought out, not sold in transgressions wake
Too poor for the penny arcade
Too shy to advertise a soul to take
grievances upon a spirit's hot perversity 
in heavy metal silver black viscosity
Liquid independence sugar-free
choked the taste sleeping on rehearsed tongues 
to take control in metaphorical justice
Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Bells toll in towers of recoiled love
holy water sprayed on tenacity's burn
genuflecting in the sins of the father
sleeping with the enemies sins
waking with a brain lapped by tomorrow's legs
chasing worth in extinct penny thoughts
Nails of falsetto on a swim 
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins
shouting on the hills of hallowed Bombay
epic criminality in restraints
saints and sinners busted the parade
Heritage incredulous to old ways
slammed the door on parallels
Ultimate destruction of direction
Smithereens celebrate a raise
Snow days on the valley of proximity
Why have you not heard from me?
The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded
Hello silence my new friend
Underneath a scribble are the almighty elements
Circles only lock me in now
Thoughts settle on my head like apples
whims sparkle like bikini-clad wisdom
So unlike the time when knowledge sunk in
nothing made no sense
until the next voice appeared
Dissipate while you still have the choice
Flowered queen of shelter self-destructed
Adrenaline beat the pants off pride
Sojourned peccability into oblivion 
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of  history's poetic cries

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia]

Charlatan adrenaline rebelled, overthrowing blood
with directional discretion wavering like water
Are you kidding me? that is a great line!!!!

The universe absolved my breath
faithful death took my curse
answers written in tragedy's braille
skies opened my eyes to be blinded

Awesome lines!!!!

Sojourned peccability into oblivion
tempestuous winds burnt my skin
in turbulence of history's poetic cries

Fantastic ending!!!! great collab!!!

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance.....! You've picked a mixture of both our poetry's, Steve is going to be so jazz'd too...grazie mille Pat!

[Patricia]

You are welcome....it is art that two made as one and really melded together perfectly, it gave a beautiful balance and I hope to read more collabs with you two. :))

[Frieda P]

That's so good to hear, you've made my night! Grazie again. :)

[Patricia]

Well then YAYAYAYAY!!!! :D

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Patricia :) We practically wrote it one line at a time, and most of the lines have both of us in it :)

[Patricia]

You are very welcome, it is wonderful, it is difficult to tell which one is who because I have followed Frieda for some time even before I joined here so I thought I would be able to tell which was her words and yours but I can't so that just shows how well you two blended your talents together. I am mystified by the whole collab. I really hope you two do more together. Bravo!

[kublakhan27]

So glad you enjoyed it :) We've written several of them actually, this being the most recent...some are on her profile and some are on mine...we have an awesome time writing together, and we've always had a creative chemistry that neither of us seem to be able to define...I'm sure we will do more :)

[Tate Morgan]

Ok D****t you are getting over my head I only have a 6th grade education you kno.

[Frieda P]

That's amusing Tate, since it's a subject matter you know so much about haha

[Scott Metro]

A complicated journey....
Well done my dear..!!!


Scott

[Frieda P]

Isn't it always wolfie, thanks, jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration....!

[Scott Metro]

Jazzed you are you..!!
:)

[Frieda P]

If I'm lucky enough lol ;)

[Scott Metro]

peshawwww..!!!..you got it girl..!!

[Simran Kewlani]

Oh my god! This is so long! :O
And amazing. :P

[Frieda P]

Blame it on Benji, it was his idea!! ha.....thanks Simran. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! I don't really know who Benji is, so I might as well tell you so you can do me a favour by telling him that it's really long. :p Whatever, It's a good poem, worth the time. :D

[Frieda P]

My nickname for Steve, the other poet who wrote this with me....he's a genius really, you should stop by his page and visit...Kublakhan27.

[Simran Kewlani]

Sure, I will. Thank you. :)

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Simran :)

[ron]

I think my brain just had sex with a dictionary...not sure but what a ride. :)

[ms. barrie]

sorry to hijack this comment reply, but seriously...LMFAO, ron!!! hilarious!!! :)

[ron]

Thank you Barrie. I think the thesaurus was in the corner watching.

[ms. barrie]

refrains from making comment ;)

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, did you need a ciggie afterwards ron?

[ron]

Lol. Only if I can have the dictionary when I do.

[Frieda P]

Hey whatever floats your boat redwood ;)

[ron]

Its not fault you two wrote this :)

[Frieda P]

We wanted to take a walk on the wild side, jazz'd it worked! :)

[ron]

I think I need a library now :)

[Frieda P]

I always love when I learn a new word...put on yer big boy pants hon ;) haha

[ron]

Oh there on and ready to..."Learn" new words :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Nails of falsetto on a swim
clawed a scribble in eye's lapses
penetrated in unvital organ's ties
lyrically dallied on weeping violins

Superlative surreal imagery with this piece, you two.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pryde....

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much Pryde.

[Cory Barrett]

I am fairly certain that you two are a lot more intelligent than i am.

[Frieda P]

I think we're just a bit crazy Streamline, thanks for reading...

[kublakhan27]

Yeah I'm with Mrs.R on that haha...thank you Streamline.

[Shirlena]

Well I guess you two know ya'll killed...honey ya'll bettah WRITE!!!! It continues to trips me out that the two of you literally become one entity when you write and you can't decipher head from booty but I ain't mad. This is the stuff good writer's are inspired by. I'm bowing down and going to write sumpin.

[Frieda P]

Ha you crack me up dahlin....grazie mille!

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much my friend :)

[Ayushi]

Wonderful wonderful write.. You are hell of a writer ..
Keep it up :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Ayushi, glad your enjoyed our collaboration :)

[redzone]

Hmmmm, what does one do when too poor for the penny arcade??? Just ask Frieda and Steve!! Just stay away from the fun house and those mirrors, those abstract images just may blow you away... so boys and girls either save your pennies for the arcade, or keeps your eyes closed til it's safe... won't even try to say more, just ditto AprilRN.... SO Benji, Mrs R, is this all you have to say?? lol... ~~redzone

[kublakhan27]

Haha We said a lot this week my friend, two poems worth, with this one being our longest to date, I'm still not sure where it all came from...that's how a poor boy passes time I suppose...Mrs.R doesn't like it when I get complacent ;) Thank you Redzone :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I heard whinging coming from the peanut gallery! Thanks Curt, Benji just never shuts the fook up....that's what brilliance does. ;)

[redzone]

HA, the peanut gallery is,as usual, throwing peanuts, clamoring for the next show to begin.. I have my pennies, see... so boys and girls, where's Howdy Doody and Buffalo Bob, hopefully not chasing Mr Froggy and his magic twanger.. er... have a nice day... :-p

[kublakhan27]

Hahaha She even hears me from afar my friend...I'm not safe I tell you...well actually she IS the one that keeps me safe in these parts...she takes good care of me :)

[Frieda P]

What are you smokin' Curt ahaha

[redzone]

I'm sure she does Steve, she is a special woman and you are in good hands...

[A. Amos]

Great write guys, and truly enjoyable read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille A, muchly appreciated your kind words....

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much A.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...