I breathe you in...

I breathe you in...

A Poem by Frieda P
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I breathe you in,
my world expands
     making me  feel
whole again,
in this moment of time,
pain is soothed
  mysteries of life come alive
    beauty surrounds
my senses
even angst is a study
in survival
I hear symbiotic
 rhythm's rhyme
   & the dance is perfumed
in clarity
hushed whispers
of insanity's rush
  playing a sweet tempo
in staccato notes
lulling me on tranquility's 
crystal clear clouds


© 2014 Frieda P


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This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.



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This to me could be about either someone very close to you like a lover or a dear friend, or it could be a reference to spirituality. Either way it is a very calming piece of work, letting us realize that while life twists and turns us around like a tornado, there is still comfort to be had, simply by breathing in the positive vibrations around us. Great song choice by the way, I feel like I haven't heard this one in way too long.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ashira, I love your interpretation, you're a very astute poetess dear.
This is wonderful. A goosebump giver again. Love is like this, and its intensity fills the soul, and touches every part.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I knew you'd relate in your present state, thanks KL. :)
A gentle flowing expression of the high we get from being thrilled by another human being, from really wanting them to be special to us. Lovely my Lady, lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Just noticed you used the same picture I used?
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

For which poem?
John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Found it at last! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Passion8/1382433/
What a gift, finding that person that brings us peace. That we feel safe with.
Great write. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

No... Apparently I'm not needed as much as I thought I'd be. :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I guess you're not complaining right? More time for you. ;)
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

No complaints. :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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