Jedi mind tricks

toe curling,

 tendril sweeping,

    mind dipping

Jedi mind tricks,

  kaleidoscopic tilting 

   of your tiding's 

          persuasive sway

swept away

                by trickles ebb & flow, 

bated breath's

surrendering in

 caresses of

   flesh-tone weepings 

   as inky effusion's

               drip in offerings,

seeping onto

                  volcanic blank pages

   in deliverance's

                        safekeeping

Author's Note

Reviews

[writing mojo]

some defined forces here, not sure of the star wars connection, (said my childhood), but the mature nature in space does ignites more then my lightsaber. I like the shards of wordy jenga here..pieces to put together in towering writer dotting and connecting skit row rhythms to enthralling skin as inspiration..good piece

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, 'ignites more than your lightsaber'...oh the imagery. Thanks so much mojo. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Some people are master of illusions when it comes to emotions.

Funny cause I just posted a poem the other day that is Star Wars themed.

[Frieda P]

Our galaxies must be in alignment Dale, thanks so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure Moonbeam.

[Jon Roggie]

With a light caress, you will forget my words. A gentle touch, and you will see what I see. A slow kiss, and you will begin to understand.

Are these the jedi mind tricks you talked of?

Nice write!

[Frieda P]

Could be, there's always a trick Jon. :) Thanks muchly!

[Matching Socks]

OMG, I am a massive Star Wars fan!!!
I wrote a poem same name believe it or not but a Senryu. :)
Great minds think alike but yours is much sweeter music to the ears.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ana Sophia, must be the stars are in tune with our minds. :) Who's the gun for....

[Matching Socks]

The stars are in tune. :) I've been watching spy movies so I thought I'd go under cover, maybe shoot a few people through the heart, like a modern day Cupid? I mean, I know the bow and arrow made a come back with the Hunger Games but the gun is more efficient.

[Frieda P]

Ha....take aim and fire away. :)

[Matching Socks]

Bang bang!! Ok, the next man to set eyes on you will fall for you! Not sure how that's different from today though? ;)

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd, don't send any lunatics my way... :)

[Matching Socks]

Lol!!! No way. I think poor April is already dealing with all of them.

[Frieda P]

Ha, she's younger, she can deal with it, I've had my share. :)

[B-poet]

Sensuality meets creative galaxy poetry. I really liked the written journey of sensual creativity you've displayed here. A clever & expressive write. Great work. A tantalizing read. :)

[Frieda P]

Oh I like that Bpoet, what a grand description....thanks so much. :)

[kublakhan27]

Okay, I didn't waste time with this one Mrs.R ;) Jedi mind tricks eh? I'm still pondering that image...it actually takes the poem (or my interpretations of it) to a lot of different places, but I'll stick with the literal images cuz they're more fun...the last six lines are a knockout...I love it when you merge sex and poetry...I wasn't gonna have a drink tonight, now I'm contemplating it just a bit ;P xo

[Frieda P]

Nothing is ever literal, you know that Dali. :) Thanks so much, sorry if I managed to drive you to drink haha ;) xo

[kublakhan27]

Ha That I know Mrs.R :) No worries, you know you can drive me anywhere, not to insanity though, I'm already there ;) xo