Synchronicity of rhythm's rhyme ~

      

 A

rose on wings 

             of poetry's flight,

      fire within

        leaked through

             inky passages,

     mindful reminisces

          singing of heart,

rendered lyrics of

 exhaustive

            mind f*****g songs,

broken pieces

                 & puzzle's shadow,

bird's of paradise

  

soar to surrender in

       ocean's depths 

                   of forgone seasons,

      wildflowers whirling on 

                    baby's breath zephyrs,

             blood spilled 

                in the name of the father,

 cosmic encounters

                under moonlit excursions,

whimsy of fairy dust

                 upon fluffy icicle clouds

posh feathers tickling

          perfumed leather & lace,

     took the long way

 home 

       on the road less

           traveled of poesy,

          transporting phases

                   as phantasm's heights

 dance in the 

       synchronicity

         of

                         rhythm's 

                                    rhyme

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

This makes me wonder and send me en- dreaming I had to make that word up I think I don't have any other way to share with you what it is that happens to me when you write this way. But the opposity of a logical intruction manual like them used in Ikea Step 1 do this step 10 you have achived this. Imaginative - thinking maybe but it comes short as well. I feel as if it was a passage of yourself , breathing , consuming , changing, and how different influences affect your life. I just admire the way you share it. Of course as I have confessed early I am only glad that I can accompany your journey.

Won't even try walking in your shoes probably I 'll get blisters.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

Woo your review blew my skirt up this morning Rene. Love the new word, apropos, we're all dreamers in our own unique way, no? That's why I'm more comfortable in flip flops, exposed and no blisters. Grazie mille.

[kublakhan27]

Wow, this one is like a mood swing Mrs.R...lots of different things going on here, with each one getting their own assessment...the shock value of a naughty word is unavoidable, that's rare for you but it works for that reason haha...this is very much a microcosm of the poet's plight for me, picking up little pieces from every experience, be it good or bad, and putting them together to produce a frenetic psychological odyssey...for a reader, it is profoundly insightful, for a fellow poet, it is some to relate to, as much as one can relate to your work anyway as it is so inimitable...the shadow of the puzzle fades ever so gradually as one makes his way through this piece, and when all is said and done, we have a pretty good glimpse at Mrs.R's thought process...it is wild and wacky and visceral and a million other things, but it's those million things, compared to the handful of things that many of us lean on, that makes your poetry what it is...as long as you wield a pen, your poetic wings will never falter :) xo

[Rossen]

You're my huckleberry! Wow you are on a roll and how! I want what she is having kind of moment...100/100

[Frieda P]

Oh wow, doing the happy dance, although last time someone called me their huckleberry, it got pretty messy. :) Thanks muchly Rossen.

[Lyn Anderson]

We wander on parallel tracks and meet in poetic dreaming. A sexy sensual imaginative slow ride. Now, with my favourite line being possibly subject to MatuRating police, I unfortunately must point out the absence of the pink warning in this piece. Ps I hate writing and reviewing from phone and internet still down. :)

[Frieda P]

Sensual, really...like that. My weensy F-bomb, are you kidding me, have you read some the kids poetry on this site? :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I know, it's not me, I just don't want you to get in trouble. I got in trouble for a lot less than that.

[Lyn Anderson]

And yes, I find your dreamy meanderings sensual. Call me weird. Cause I am.

[Frieda P]

I know that you're weird dragon sister, in the best way possible....that's the way it came out in my head, I thought of changing it to 'mind blowing' then I said fook it. ;)

[s y e]

Holy moly cheeseballs Mama F... I literally have no words to write that would tell you how much I loved this one and how it completely left me speechless. There are so many amazing words and lines that I could not even begin to pick as it wouldn't be fair to the rest but wow, you really do have the power to shut anyone up with your poetry. I so love how you write and share it and how relatable it is - this is definitely my little safe haven, Mama F. You're the most talented Mumma ever! :-) xoxoxo

[Frieda P]

Wooo cheeseballs! That's a first, jazz'd you enjoyed my foray into poetic nuttiness. ;) x

[s y e]

Cheeseballs is the new 'holy moly macaroni!' Ahahaa, always a pleasure gorgeous.

[Sami Khalil]

A lot of us seek synchronicity and order in their lives or written works. On the roads less traveled, we encounter the human aspect and others the shadows. Those passages can be tricky and unknown. Excellent from your pen...:)...

[Frieda P]

Very true Sami, very tricky for some indeed, thanks muchly for your kind words. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Most welcome and muchly...:)... ....