04.Lovely me

Poem n Video by Pal. Hesitantly I moved on; Not knowing for sure; My purpose was clear though; To become a confident, patient, ; Rational, matured, balanced one;Moving in a path to search; Light in darkness-happiness.

 

LOVELY ME

 

Very small, delicate, helpless,

Always crying, making dirty myself

The clothes I wore, the bed I sleep

And all the places I move about

 

Yet all took me, did all helping me

Loved me, touched me, cared me

All the time eager to make me feel good

 

So nice people around me

I started feeling beauty the world

Then I said to myself

 “You are ok, I am not”

 

I was helpless and weak

Unable to move beyond

Highly sensitive and possessive

In a state of imbalance an introvert

 

I wanted to move out of myself

In to the world outside seeking

Exploring being creative, adventurous

Trying to become an extrovert so to say

 

It was thrilling to feel independent

Moving about freely

Knowing the secrets of life

The pains and hidden pleasures

 

Asked many questions, whys

Challenging the age old practices

Made others feel not good

And raise their eye brows on me

 

How could you be this!

You were not taught this!!

What kind of education you got!!!

You are not the one we wanted!!!!

 

And they called me:

“You rebellious ignorant fool”

Then I said to myself

 “I am ok, you are not”

 

Hesitantly I moved on

Not knowing for sure

My purpose was clear though

To become a confident, patient,

Rational, matured, balanced one

 

On my way I learnt

After all, all are like me

Moving in a path to search

Light in darkness-happiness

 

Then I said to myself

“I am ok, you too”

A sense of matured

Balanced View of life

 

I am moving on yet

I am not happy

Find myself not in balance

 

Still in my mind thoughts crop up

Some time “You are ok, I am not”

Yet other time “I am ok, you are not”

In extreme “Neither you nor I am ok”

 

But I resist try to force myself

To bring in the thought

“I am ok, you too”

A sense of matured

Balanced View of life

 

But some where in my heart

In my conscience mind

An intuitive thought Spark out

 

Life is every moving situation

Anything that is moving

Can never be in balance

 

All efforts to balance

End up in sheer imbalance

“The wise ones accept life as is, where is basis”

 

PAL

Poem n video by Pal

05.Lovely me

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=skXAQzJLTqU

 

Poem by Pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

07.Lovely me (Я ВОСХИТИТЕЛЕН) – in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DkqqU7swhVQ

 

Poem by pal. Translation n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

23.Lovely me (Прекрасен съм) – in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ty30nLVf270

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

Accepting what life throws our way, without knowing the answer to the question "why?" is hard indeed. This reflects a process of a spirit growing, maturing and learning throughout the trials of life; yet there will always be those moments of doubt that creep into one's soul. Nicely done.

laura :-)

[WildPigUK]

I wish I had more knowledge of poetry... is there a specific style/meter you are going for here?

All I know is I liked this one too...

[Fran Marie]

But I resist try to force myself
To bring in the thought
"I am ok, you too"
A sense of matured
Balanced View of life

There are so many reasons why things occur the way they do~
people in our lives for reasons we don't know,perhaps to balance
the too happy with the too sad~The I',m ok ,you're ok balance of life~
Great thought provoking Write~THanks for sharing~Fran Marie

[Yaooooooo]

I feels like you been through alot, and still soul searching. At least you on to a good start. Is hard to expose oneself infront of others, but by doing so we start to learn whats wrong with us and let go of all fears. Why we ask, and soon we see everything clearly. The light is at the end of the tunel, all we needed to do was to travel a strait row and yet we can seem to figure out which row to take.
Keep it up, and you on the right path
One!

[NJ Schneider]

This was...amazing. I really couldn't describe it any other way. I got so wrapped up in reading it i didn't hear my mother talking to me! Truely great work.

[Greg the Bard]

I don't follow all your wisdom but it plays to thought. I believe that is all you can ask of anyone. The seventh from the last left me wondering if you meant "An intuitive thought speaks out" instead of "An intuitive thought Spark out " I made the read a bit rough. As for the balance or imbalance the planet we live on is moving all the time and it is in great balance.

[Tania Leigh]

Very insightful, soul-searching poem....I like it very much

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A very confident and well written piece. My favourite part of the verse ... "On my way I learnt After all, all are like me Moving in a path to search Light in darkness-happiness." ... (Watch the type errs) Best wishes, Bethlynne.

[Amanda Jane]

Bravo, Pal. Bravo.
This is great. I love it! :)

Amanda Jane

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life certainly has it's good and bad moments... but then thats what makes it so interesting... thanks for taking us on one awesome journey.

[Meg Oesterling]

This poem has... a wonderful ideal behind it. Growing, maturing, becoming: Although we don't really understand these things, they continue to happen, and it must be accepted. The vocabulary in this poem is wonderfully used, even introducing the ideas of intraversion and extroversion. All I can say is this: you did a wonderful job on expressing something many people choose to look over.