Crucify the Siren: Symphony of a Reflection

Lonely is your misery,

Screaming at the tortured sea 

So silently,

So quietly,

 haunting symphony.

Trade your smiles

to the merchant of cries

My deathly angel lies,

Apart from serenest skies.

To hold your hand is to frown,

And in their sleep they drown.

In honest affection,

your honest deception

My brilliant evening sun

You brought me into this,

A bitter galleons' bliss.

But why would I be trying,

Loving...

A motionless memory dying  

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

this poem talk much about yourself
=]
very emotional

[Queen Empress]

A very nice rhythm..I like the flow of emotions ^_^

[MandaBear]

Great great poem!! keep it up

[Kuhr Gred]

wow! "A motionless memory dying " --> this is a the best ending in your poem.. i like.. GREAT write! keep it up