Love E-vol

Love E-vol

A Chapter by J. Viands

Love toy with them.

They gave you everything and you spit on it.

Now they hesitate to find you again.

Love what is this s**t?


What is this hurt, bitterness, and insolences?

Other than dishonesty and hormonal fits,

If you find the mouth to explain,

Would you say you’re just a wolf in sheep clothing?


Is it your job to piss on dreams and hearts?

I guess broken homes are a sign of this.

If you could would you please explain,

Why it is you do this to them?


How is it you came to control?

How is it you came to overthrow men at war?

Create homes and take them away in an instant,

How did you get me to scribble this down in minutes?


Explain if you find the time.

© 2012 J. Viands

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I like this, especially the saying, "hormonal fits", that is a nice description. "Pissing on dreams and hearts", I like that, as well. Some of the best poems are written quickly, and including that indication near the end of the poem adds to the overall effect. Well-done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

J. Viands

9 Years Ago

thanks man

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Added on September 30, 2012
Last Updated on September 30, 2012
Tags: Love, contradiction, questioning


J. Viands
J. Viands

Leesburg, VA

My writing is refined in to portfolios I write to much to be able to post all my poetry separately don’t feel obligated to read the whole thing just what you would like… or the whole thi.. more..

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