Word like Fear

Word like Fear

A Chapter by J. Viands

Well I can’t hold anything back now

Not a damn thing back now

Look at me dying here

I can’t help hiding here

 

There’s something in the stratosphere

Something in a word like fear

 

Something’s really hiding now

Someone’s really dying now

I can’t speak a word right here

Not a single word

 

There’s something in the candle light

Something in the word delight

 

Mutilating and suffocating

As a matter of fact it may be exasperating

Tantalizing and capturing

Now that I have spilled the beans

I must take my leave            



© 2012 J. Viands


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dying, fear of death, hiding, speechless with fright....i liked all that, nice flow, etc, ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I would take my leave, too, if I were dying and hiding. Like the lines...There's something in the stratosphere, something in a word like fear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Spilling the emotion with metaphorical ease and claustrophobic tension!
Awesome xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


J. Viands

11 Years Ago

Thanks the story for it will be posted eventually
Ruth

11 Years Ago

Most welcome xo

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J. Viands
J. Viands

Leesburg, VA



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