Equinox B

The demons invade her innocent soul,

making her character a mistress of nudity,

exemplifying her bravery and strength,

in the form of sexual foreplay.

The eight inch nails of her former lover,

imprinted in the back of her memory,

like a deranged inamorata suffering from,

obsession.

Her name is lost in the mixture of evil,

her deeds are dissipated by the whistle of the fiend wind,

her echoes are lost in the cave of slavery and 

men.

"Boris Vallejo! My one, my lover, my only one."

Her eyes dance with interrupted loneliness, 

the dance of humiliation and truth shine over

the bright horizon of the evening hour.

This fear is someone who she got to know,

and she calls fear a friend,

she has  been waiting for you to return,

to make her face her insecurities, 

of her past life.

Author's Note

Equinox B, Boris Vallego and Mistress of Nudity is apart of a "fantasy world" online. Along with the vivid pictures and imagination.

Reviews

[DontBlink158]

It's deep and flows really well, you did a freat job!

[rae52]

great really deep and powerful

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the beginning stanza... really nice write. I like the pictures in the write.

[Daytonight]

Great work. Vivid impressions. Keep on penning.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Powerful poem. I like how the character was brave with strength, but love changed everything - a bad love.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. Artwork made the poem come alive. I like the character you create and the very interesting ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sensual in a different way. It is bold and wrapped in mystery. This had creativity in it and weaves a story of fantasy and fiction.

[AndyJCash]

Great stuff, very dark and like the links you've put together with the "fantasy world"

[Everson Taveras]

Well done maestro

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully penned.