I'm just a tin can

Author's Note

jJst something short and fun.

Reviews

[Rusty]

I absolutely love this! Personally I find the creativeness sublime. What talent to take a little can that has sat in so many lives and give it voice. The can that has held the quill of the poet who with never a thought to this faitful conveyance spills the blood of their heart across paper then callously drops the spent scribe int it.

Ah the little tin can! I just love this!

[WickedPenWielder]

Loved this! love the imagination put into this and the word play was awesome. Please review mine, Insanity. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

"So raise your hands if you're all wrong in the right ways..." That Pink song filled my head reading this. By the way Iam raising both hands with pride.

I did enjoy this fun poem.

[Adora.xo]

Absolutely brilliant. I loved that it is so simple, sing-songy, but heavy with emotion, and thoughtfully written out. Great imagery as well!

~Adora
xoxo

[nevermindfan1991]

I enjoyed reading this poem because it sounded like it was written from an experienced, knowledgable, well-versed writer. Which is who you truly are. This poem was not pretentious, written carefully, and picked and crafted well-thought phrases meticulously. There was not cliches remnant in your poem. Also, every item you listed seemed original yet familiar. The poem had the well-known smell of nostalgia. The scent of adventure, wonder, and innocence that comes with childhood. That’s how I read it. The poem also has a vague yet beautifully crafted conclusion. What does the mint flower represent. I don’t know but that is up to the reader! It was truely a beautiful poem that I would not be surprised to see in my poetry anthology book. I’m very impressed. Great job, this was fantastic. I have so much to learn. All my poems combined pale in comparison to this simple yet intricate poem.

[Rene Velez]

fun indeed, loved the rhyme scheme..

[Lily Mae]

Ok but there are flowers in the tin...fresh or fading? lol.. I love this. Only you can make a tin can magical.. lol..xo

[Amila Jay]

WOW. this is great :))

[J. Barnett]

Beautiful.

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Useful, diverse! That"s how I"m seeing it and I"m sticking with that...lol

[Clockwork]

It is a pretty fun little ditty. The font is pretty cool, I can't say that I have ever seen it on here before. It almost looks like lines from a pencil. The poem reminds me of another poem called "To be of Use" by Marge Piercy