I'm just a tin can

Author's Note

jJst something short and fun.

Reviews

[Rusty]

I absolutely love this! Personally I find the creativeness sublime. What talent to take a little can that has sat in so many lives and give it voice. The can that has held the quill of the poet who with never a thought to this faitful conveyance spills the blood of their heart across paper then callously drops the spent scribe int it.

Ah the little tin can! I just love this!

[Liana]

Love it!!! girly and playful and cute...

[light and ashes]

Cool poem, the last two lines are the best part in my opinion.

[Rasputin]

"In a world where cans come to life...rated R..."
In all seriousness, I liked this. It was clever and light-hearted; kind of like a Disney/Pixar movie, without the asinine celebrity voice-actors (or the $150 million budget).
Also, it reminds me of an old coffee can that a friend of mine once filled with homemade napalm. I miss being fifteen...

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Who knew a rusty old tin can could inspire such creativity! I think I might plant a flower in that old can.

[The XYZ Writer]

This is a nice take on the tin can. You gave it a personality and a different story every time it introduced a new object. :) I quite like it.

~Sumayya

[Patrick]

wow, stunning combination of pithy statements with the font and picture -a visual feast. Keep writing short and fun

[Patrick]

read this again and still think the best thing since an apple corer, peeler and slicer

[Raven Starhawk]

Every day objects we take for granted to throw away can provide much beauty and heart. Like the can...might be a clever metaphor or maybe I am reading too much into it, but anyways great poem

[joshua deathdealer]

I love this.. Made me smile all the way through. (: beautiful

[emmajoy]

Wonderful! Such a cleverness of lines, of thoughts, of art in more than one form. This is how it is, too .. the small almost invisible this and that, part of a person's collection of rubbed-off items and happenings.. how it is, taking on the minor bits and pieces