Painless Hearts

Painless Hearts

A Poem by Forever Hidden
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Read the author's note please?....

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Let Me Burn.

Let Me Die.

Let the pain take over my soul.

 

Trying to stand my ground.

But everything around me is falling apart.

Trying to stand the pain.

 

The secrets are whispering all around.

The rumors are heard by every living thing.

While I stand in the corner of the room.

 

 

The tears streaming down my cheeks.

Thinking of what I would do next.

 

A knife lay close by.


 

 The carpet is soaked by blood.

The screams will never be forgotten,

 

My soul now lies where everything is perfect.

Where there is no pain.

No rumors.

No secrets.

Where everything is perfect.....

© 2013 Forever Hidden


Author's Note

Forever Hidden
Feedback is much appreciated! This is my first dark poems
Lol I didn't know what to put as a title so I picked a random thingy mabobber for it XD :3
Thanks for reading!

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Sigh. Reading this poem, I feel like my teenage years are coming back to the foreground. How for 3 years, I tried to shove a knife, into my chest, but failed. Even now, in my forties, this feeling still exist for me. Am hoping, you're not writing from personal experience, rather the emotions of those, close to you. Thank you, for sharing this very powerful and emotional poem, with us.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you miss! :)
therisa

8 Years Ago

Your welcome. Please call me, Therisa.
love this! i can feel the emotion u had when writing this, and thats what u want in a good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Man Thankss!!!!!!!! :"D
writer4eva

8 Years Ago

no prob :)
it is so often i feel like that it touched me deep its awsome! and dark is my thing to kinda

Posted 8 Years Ago


first second third

8 Years Ago

fee free to ceck my work out
Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

I shall once I am free :D
first second third

8 Years Ago

ok:)
wow. this is so powerful. good job sky!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

THANK YOU! :D
beautiful dreamer

8 Years Ago

YOU WELCOME! XD
I love the pain expressed in this piece! Reading dark poetry has always had a dangerous yet enticing feel..

I am very new to this site and would greatly appreciate any feedback in a review on my first and only piece.. Thank you

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
And I will ^^
Dark poetry can be fun to write and fun to read....and it can serve as a healing purpose....Very well penned my friend.....Whisk

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you! ^0^
Wonderful...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome...^^~^^ :)
The girl is dead.
Let her sleep in peace.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review...
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome
The title surely has nothing to do with the poem, still liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Forever Hidden

8 Years Ago

Yes I'm fully aware of that.
Thank you for the review
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you for writing

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