broken girl

This poam is about What my mothers brother made me I hate him

Look at me... What have you done to
my life with your dirty hands?
You took my childhood and threw it away,
you did things to me that I will never forget,
now I'm forever a broken girl.
I was just a child, I didn't deserve that.
I used to be outgoing but now
look at what you have done to me...

Author's Note

This was the first poam I ever wrote

Reviews

[LittleArizona]

Few words, and let it paints an image. What I like about this poem is that you don't give much detail-you leave the reader wondering what you are not only referring to but also it allows me (as the reader) to put my own perspective in place and fantasize not only what you as the writer are referring to but as the reader I can relate to however my perspective allows me to!

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am so sorry someone hurt you so bad.Your writing is very good and you should keep it up it will help you with your feelings:)

[child of God]

Thanks I know that's why I write is to let out all the pain that's in side of me

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are welcome you keep at it

[child of God]

I sure will

[Daniel Sala]

What an intense read, it's heart-breaking. In eight lines you convey the anger, hurt, the feeling of being broken because of a stupid person's selfish actions with brave honesty. The reality here is probably hard for people to get their heads around and therefore review, a shame as your poem is - despite the incorrect grammar (unlesss that was deliberate) - excellent. Thank you for posting this.

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very bitter and very sad poem. but also very beatiful writing . i think you are good. at poetry i realy like it.