pizza
A Poem by
Shapirta
a haiku on pizza please review and tell me what you think
you have fresh pizza
crispy, delicious, cheesy,
give me some right now!
© 2014 Shapirta
Author's Note
please review! i want to know what you think!
Reviews
LOL. Did the pizza shop post this in their window? You might suggest they do to advertize your awesome skill!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Well, I want pizza now,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Posted 9 Years Ago
Well, I want pizza now,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
9 Years Ago
lol. my friends emailed me a pic of her eating pizza which inspired me to write this lol. we all hav.. read more lol. my friends emailed me a pic of her eating pizza which inspired me to write this lol. we all have that feeling
Hahaha :D This is awesome! Three lines of writing, and now I'm craving pizza!! :D Great job!!! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Hahaha :D This is awesome! Three lines of writing, and now I'm craving pizza!! :D Great job!!! :)
haha! Too early in the morning to crave it..
Share with me when you have some? :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
haha! Too early in the morning to crave it..
Share with me when you have some? :)
Haha...a slice here also...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Haha...a slice here also...
9 Years Ago
willing to, if only i was the one with the pizza!
Haha I love this! I think it would actually be classified as a Senryu (same format as a Haiku, but Haikus are about nature exclusively.) I have written a Senryu on pizza as well ironically, but it wasn't as enthusiastic because I work at a pizza place. Great job on this my friend!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Haha I love this! I think it would actually be classified as a Senryu (same format as a Haiku, but Haikus are about nature exclusively.) I have written a Senryu on pizza as well ironically, but it wasn't as enthusiastic because I work at a pizza place. Great job on this my friend!
9 Years Ago
you work at a pizza place? which one?
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Added on September 4, 2014
Last Updated on September 4, 2014
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Shapirta dude hi!, NY
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i recently turned eleven, and for as long as i can remember, have always loved writing. haha wow. now im 12. time flies..
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