Her Heart Blows In The Wind

Lost love

 The wind took a piece of her heart

An ache ripples within her existence

Nostalgia made tears paint her sadden face

While the clouds cried that day

Her heart drips on summer heat

A mountain of pain dances in the rain

Imperfection of love shadows the once glistening moon

Upon the wings of air her heart resides there

Unpleasant words written in permanent ink tell their story

Abstract tomorrows fade into wannabe

When her heart blows in the wind,

the sun and moon stare with misty eyes

Another piece of her heart serenades the bleak

horizon with a melancholy tune

If only her heart's destiny was to find the

one who tore her heart apart,

and put it back together again

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

such a sad write but really well written

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Patricia Wedel]

Mending Hearts ♥️ torn apart with Wind and Rain… the Sun smiles and Bluebirds desire to bring harmony to a broken chord with sweet and tender tethering.
gently, Pat

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Lydia Shutter]

Heartbreaking sadness in every line of this well written poem. Lydi**

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[M. J. Smith]

Or perhaps, like a beaded necklace, new beads can be collected to string a new pattern. Heartbreak should never define us
Sad words. Amazing tapestry if verse. Well written.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you so much!

[Miss Sharon]

It is a sad write but written so well one hardly notices. ~Sharon

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

Sad but true. Things take worst case scenarios in life. It offers lessons and chances for recovery. A touching poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you so much for your review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome

[D]

I love this! If I'm not mistaken, this is a poem about heartbreak and recovering from it. This is such a relatable topic and you did very well with writing it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[Loner]

Dear Imagination 101,
Great piece of work, the way you have portrayed pain is awesome.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you for your kind words! Sorry for the delay in thanks!

[Mauricio Montoya]

To lose something so close and feel empty and then find closure can be hard to accept, excellent write, thank you for sharing

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you!

[R.E. Ray]

I read unquestionable love, maybe her first, maybe lost to another, maybe lost to death. But, gone is gone, or so the heart's pain. Yet, I read hope in your last few lines, perhaps a trace belief that another will mend her heart and the world will be sunny and warm again. A poem that truly touches the heart.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thank you so much for your review! Sorry it has took me so long to reply!