Universal Affairs

For the Creative Poetry Group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

From the day we were born on this abode,

what we call the world, our home

was made of different compartments

           LOVE

                HATERED

                           WAR

                                PEACE

 

 

Life became a revolving circle of twist and turns

                    LEFT

                         RIGHT

                              STRAIGHT AHEAD

           DEAD END

Which way is the right way to travel?

 

Hatered spreads like wild fire,

burning up peace

Anger is the power of retention

Forgiveness is restrained,

pride steps in,

washes away any hope of amendments

 

Deception falls into succession with hatered and anger,

Each one ranks high

Inflicts acute pain

Ominous people cause ghastly effect

 

A world of sinister lives shadows the good

Love is choked by repugnant people that has

no concept of peace and happiness,

war is their glory

 

Meticulous caution does nothing to bring safety

Thieves and murders haunt everyday lives

Religion is remonstrated

People say God Does not exist

Eyes need to become transparent

See the world that he created,

resuscitate it to the way he wanted it to be with

              LOVE

                   HAPPINESS

                                KINDNESS

       PEACE

 

 

 

 

                         

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For the creative poetry group! Words I had to use is in my tag box!

What do you think?

Reviews

[Judas Hammer]

I like how this started out with a light feeling then dove into the darkness and showed a little light at the end. I like your question and feel we can learn from pieces such as this....very good write

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful and so true. Hate always seems stronger and gets much more attention, so many strive to make the world a hateful place...but I think love and peace will win out. I can only hope I'm around to witness it.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Beautiful!! So true...thank you for sharing...God bless you!:))

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Construction is perfect.....makes perfect sense do your epic poetic words :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Your poem's message is so true...

[Misty_Prophet]

It's good, really wise and true, but I have to admit I like your love poems more...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..

[Coyote Poetry]

LOVE HAPPINESS
KINDNESS PEACE
Four simple words that would make this world a better place. Seem so easy for us to be kind. Time for all of us to re-think our way of life. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

A clever write. You have summed it up quite nicely. The truth here is potent and I think the message behind it is valid.