Underneath Stitches Are Scars

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stitches blanket a torn body

A tapestry of wounds inflicted by life

Each illustrates a story of suffering

Crimson blood pools in inflamation

 

Lying words  of love

Never spoken in truth

Heart needs mainteance

Repair is nonexistence

 

Deception of beauty resonates inside

a cinderella's mind

Mirror mirror on the wall

Whose the prettiest one of all

Mimicks a dying soul

Crown of self respect tarnish,

falls like blacken ashes

 

Abuse covers her in blue

Tempestuous hands

Smoldering anger

Cuts to the core

She is broken, bleeding and alone

 

Betrayal of FAMILY, FRIENDS, the WORLD

Traps her in a web of repugnance

Looks upon her as nonentity

A person that should never have been born

 

Her heart is opened

A sign want you be mine visible

to all that will read

Stitches embroidery her exterior

Underneath scars that band her from healing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

What was I thinking? Not sure"LOL"
Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Sad and true. I can feel the sorrow and anger emanate from these words. Excellent write, the words are fantastic.

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is great :)))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is very sad. "Lying words of love, Never spoken in truth, Heart needs maintenance, repair in nonexistence."
"Abuse covers her in blue"~sad that abuse has to ever be endured, and hopefully the victim can find strength to heal.

[Star Wolf]

I feel the pain in this one, a whole lot of hurt and pain. Awesome write!

[Tina Kline]

Extraordinary poem. The scars that can't be seen are often the ones hardest to heal from. Scars on the outside are the hardest ones for others to get past to the hurting person within.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Brilliant. This poem makes me a little sad cause I feel like I am broken... covored in my scars... pain.... betrayal. Good Job!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

An amazing write on a painful and tragic subject. Brilliant work!

[Morning Star]

This is a very sadden write expressing the reality of life
You have written what so many
of us feel at times
Great job!
Hugsss :)

[An owl on the moon]

Just your title is brilliant, filling the mind with the image.. the powerful metaphor... There are signs of darkness that fill our world, and this makes me ever so much more watchful.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Faithful and remembrance to the point that I loved it, well done, good read.