The Voice Of Reasoning

Creative Poetry Group: We had to write about the picture!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A siren's voice speaking in the deep sub-conscience

Articulate words of reasoning racing through the brain,

instilling ingredients of right from wrong

Alluring sounds that are conspicuous

 

Counterfeit truth deafen ears

Insulated thoughts block sub-conscience

Intense feelings surface deep in the abyss heart

Stop, listen to me, a brillant intelligent voice orders

 

Strong existence is over powering

Divine essence of personality

Envisage images are vivid.

A duplicate of self speaking from within,

pushing you to aspire

 

Coherent voice radiates consolation,

yearning to colaborate with your outer being

Mind becomes lucid

Stop, listen to the voice of reasoning,

your conscience, a guidance through life

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

I have to say I think this is the best one I have read from you... easy on flow, catches me and holds me from start to end... beautiful write sis!!

[BlueDreams]

Imagery was great in this craft... An awesome write .. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are true in this poem. We need to listen to the voice of reasoning. I like the artwork and the powerful words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes we just find inner strength we can not explain in moments we need it the most. a very uplifting and positive write.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the twist you put on this challenge. Many would have seen this as mother earth but you used it as the inner voice. the words are strong your thoughts are clear.

[limbalring]

Yes! Getting caught up in this realm of reality can really block your spirit. It's amazing how letting go of your left brain and instead being conscious in the present moment, leaving all other worries to work themselves out, and having faith they will gets you in tune to your inner self. I love how you expressed your experience.

Thank you.

[Star Wolf]

Interesting and very creative.