Hypocrite

You are a hypocrite
A liar of the lowest kind
I gave my heart to you
I was so blind
Every word that you said
It was too good to be true
Even this I knew
Deep down in my naive heart
I cry for you
Only your selfishness
Outdoes your greed
A feat I fear
Can only lead
To the death of you
It was the death of me

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Definitely no words were wasted in this poem; it's excellent. It defines what a hypocrite is and how they are but you personally know one and their words dragged you down. You're also afraid of their lies will lead them to their untimely death?

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful. And the line
'deep down in my naive heart
i cry for you'
was outstanding. A great piece. I like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Your point was made in so few words. A liar can take many down with them. No wasted words. Just a outstanding poem.
Coyote