Falling

falling for you all over again . . .

Found myself missing you again.

Am I ever going to get the chance to move on?

Love, you know how hard it is for me to resist that smile of yours.

Later tonight I'll regret it all--I'm already starting to.

I can't see past the facade, past the hugs and kisses and hollow promises.

No turning back now, even though I want to.

Great, I think I'm falling again.

Author's Note

yet another poem i am not too sure i like. represents what its like to fall for someone again after thinking you were over them. enjoy. :)

Reviews

[KAREN]

Full of emotion! Nice job!

[Kayla P.]

I like how you used the words from "falling" to make a great poem! Great work!

[tk]

acrostics is such a creative way of writing a poem. :) anyway, it's a very good poem. i can relate with this situation.. very direct to the point, and it flows pretty well. a beautiful poem coming from you! thanks for sharing. :)

[Sarah]

it is very lovely and true.
XD

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Love is a very complicated thing... and hard to let go completely when there are still feelings lingering. The emotions are relateable. Well penned!

[newyearnorma]

i have known this feeling all to well, great work

[Farah]

nice. it shows your deep thoughts inside. very expressive.

[Emm'here]

This is so cool! Haha:) I love how you formatted the first letter of the sentences. Oh, and the last line is super powerful :D I loved it!

[paradise]

its a nice acroustic poem shortbut got to the point

[13ReasonsWhy]

i loved it and loved the wording you choose. amazing.