We Walk As One

We Walk As One

A Poem by Phil & Bren's Collaborations

Walking on the mountian tops with you
Our spirits soar as the eagles on high
Holding your hand as the wind blows strong
I feel the world surround me and I sigh

Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy

Walking in the valley with you
Fearing nothing as long as we are together
Our footsteps echo to each other
As one with the love that we share

Walking across heaven with you
Dancing as the celestial chorus plays
A symphony of eloquence
As forever we sing in sweetest harmony

WE WALK IN LOVE AS ONE ....................

© 2008 Phil & Bren's Collaborations


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I agree with Beautifully Tragic- You two do work beautifully together.

Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy

Wow! Thats not all I felt about this but its all I feel safe with saying. WOW!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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" WE WALK IN LOVE AS ONE " Now that line says it all, when you are truly in love
I enjoyed this write very much
Thanks too both of you
Ray { Not a Poet }


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We walk in love as one...
You suave debonair hunk of man!
Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful love poem .. it shouts love.. gorgeous.

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great!! Simply great!!
Once again so many beautiful images in my mind...ooooh!!
"Walking on the mountain tops with you
Our spirites soar as the eagle on high
Holding your hand as the wind blows strong
I feel the world surround me and I sigh"
Beautiful lines...and definitely my favourite!!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i write my reviews
before i read any reviews
so that the reviews dont
influence my review

how did you manage
to get so many
to review the poems

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i felt nothing else
in the whole wide world
matters but the two

it was obvious that its
the two is all that matters
the world seems so small

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow now that is collaboration,,you guys are soul mates no doubt,,,keep going, keep loving, and may the love you share reflect onto others, so they may find something so beautiful to share... =)

Much love you two
From
Me

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww....you guys are great. This is so lovely....as every love should be. Excellent piece!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last stanza said it all for me, even after death, you walk as one, beautifully expressed, you compliment each others writing and that is a good collaboration.
Antony

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kudos to the both of you....well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome Glitter Hi, I'm Phil and I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway. Hi, I'm Brenda and I live in Georgia in the USA in a small town called .. more..

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