deep Blue Sky!!

well this is a poem i wrote back in 2009... just hope you like it.,....

Deep Blue sky,

As I look up at the sky I see a beautiful blue sky.

I see a bird fly by.

I look down at the ground.

I see green grass, and thank God for all the beautiful things.

I look back up at the sky and listen to the birds chirp.

I see the pretty clouds go by.

Oh what a Joy.

The End,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

this is my poem when i wrote it back in 2009 when i first started writing poetry ,,,,, i have always writen stories and books since i was in 2nd grade but started writing poems back in 2009 when i was 17 i loved it started researching more to find out how and what to make my poems better and sound good ....

well just let me know what you think

Reviews

[MandaBear]

very awesome :)

[BluRaven aka Bootsy]

i like it, it reminds me of my old days, living free and with not a care in the world, juss noticing the beauty of life

[exotic flotsam]

Refreshig to read a happy poem. Wonderful world emerges for those who look. Sordid anger remains, and always shall. I like this insight.

[Becky Clancy]

I thought that your poem was really pretty (:

good poem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem says a lot with so little. It reminds us to take time to be grateful for all we have. Life's beauty and magic lies within the obvious, but so easily overlooked. There is a lot of wisdom here.

[SapphirianVampiress]

Wonderful

[Emerald Seas]

Taking note of simple pleasures, and gifts that are around us each day. A wonderfully uplifting piece.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Lovely indeed, I can see how you cherish nature with this one.

[Morrigan Nicole]

beautiful!