Dear Death

First poem I've written in a while.. I hope that you all can relate, and really feel the emotion in this piece.

I’ve seen you around.

So Unfair. Conniving. Spontaneous.

You are a thief. A criminal.

Time and time again you make yourself known,

Then fade into the background.

Leaving me wondering. Leaving me worrying.

Just as I reach acceptance you strike anew.

Taking another piece of my heart.

Yet another piece of my mind.

Reviews

[ATG]

This is a good poem. I could get really get the sense of emotion behind it.a

[Antonio Valentino]

life just isnt fair, but then its all we got isnt it...

we cant take life too seriously or we'll never get out of it alive...

Loved this.
:)

[NotEasilyBroken]

Its really relateable..great piece.

[Tree Bark]

this is really great! :)

[roy mccarthy]

great poem,
reminds me of one i wrote a long time ago called time!
you should check it out!
i like this,dark and very true :)

[Personne]

This is perfect. Death always seems unfair, and it's just horrible. I love this, I do, especially the last two lines. They sum it up perfectly.

[nicolo]

Sweet.