My Dearest Friend

relationship, Love

        My Dearest Friend

 

   Down by the pond use to be my favorite walk. It was where me and the Lord,would always have our talk. On day's where I thought the day would never end I would go for a walk with my dearest friend.

   Alway's a comfort, my troubles would fade away. He would turn my darkest into the brightest day. But then somehow those days came to a sudden end and it feels like Iv'e lost my best friend.

   I know he's still waiting on my return and if I know him, his arms are open with concern. I don't know how I let myself drift astray, away from my dearest friend who has been there every day. I feel so low for putting him aside when his life he gave for me, Yes, the day he died. I know he forgives me because He loves me so much and with that in mind I'm getting back in touch. In touch with my friend who with him there is no end. An everlasting love is He and so much more. He's the one true friend who's too precious to ignore...

 

                       

Reviews

[Richard]

faith in anything is really a sacred effort ... this was really a sacred poem this was lovely

[Jessie]

Thank you Richard for reviewing and for your kind words...

[i cant stay behind]

so beautiful and encouraging i can Guess your Dearest ,Is my Dearest to .

[Jessie]

Thank you! I'm glad my Dearest, is your Dearest too! lol...thanks for the read!

[zainul]

Amazing piece.
Enjoyed reading.

[Jessie]

Thank you Zainul, I'm so glad you liked it...

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Jessie.
This is really a great pleasure of mine.:)

[Betty]

This poem is very interesting and it has that graceful flow of which i enjoyed so very much.

[Jessie]

Thanks Betty for the review! I love hearing positive feedback that's what encourages me to keep pushing on....thanks again..

[Betty]

You are more than welcome Jessie :))

[AK]

Thankfully he's very patient. Much more patient than we imagine. Well done!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

There are spots where the meter seems a smidge askew, but some things are more important than technical perfection. This poem is wonderful for it's heart and it's faith and it's message.

I adore it.

[TL Boehm]

Simply stated, penned honesty in this piece. heartfelt and poignant. I found it resonant. I've been in this place.

[Arthur Henn]

Pulled the heartstrings of this soul of mine. Wonderfuly written... Priceless.

Art

[*~Kristy~*]

I loved this very much... Flowed perfectly. It reminded me of how I used to feel about an old best friend...Thanks for sharing it :)

[Bare trees]

A very good message for all to here. You sound very well spoken as well, as your words seem to flow easily from word to word. Nicely done.