My missing best friend

My missing best friend

A Poem by Thomas Sawyer
"

Can't reach her, can't go to her house, i just miss my best friend!

"

Can't call, can't visit, can't see you

What i'm i supposed to do when i miss you

I've been busy and now it's the day's end

Still i can't talk to my best friend.

 

Folks think i'm crazy when i say she's just a friend

They don;t get it 'cos it's not the trend

I know we are going to be fine at the day's end

But for now, i still miss my friend!

 

Where on earth are you at?!!!

© 2011 Thomas Sawyer


Author's Note

Thomas Sawyer
Was very emotional writing this, might not make too much sense as a poem. Ignore the last line :-)

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yeah they dont get it cos it's not the trend.beautiful writeup. i wish i am ur friend.we look daily for people who really care about us but .........

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad... i have felt this so many times... really great work... im sure many people can relate to it... good work, keep it up!
*cocoabean*

Posted 11 Years Ago


This brought tears to my eyes. My best friend graduates this year and is leaving me. He's a guy, too. ):

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This was really good, the only thing I saw as a mistake was you said "what i'm i suppose to do" Perhaps change it to what am I suppose to do. Other than that, great poem, I know the feeling

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved this.. you can definatly feel the emotion. great job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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