Listen To Their Story

Listen To Their Story

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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The shadows on the wall say a lot more than you think... :)

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The shadow's on the wall
telling their tale
of happiness and sorrow
of success and fail
Love and hatred
peace and war
Their imagination
opening a new door
to a peaceful heaven
and an anguished hell
Which of these is the right path?
Only time will tell

Dancing, Twirling
reciting their story
of love so gentle
Of hate so gory

Which path will they choose?
Which side will they take?
For that is your story,
For you to make

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


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nice =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well written and much enjoyed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great Poem! I love the suspense and the emotions throughout. I wondered what was going to happen the whole time and the poem ended the same way. You really hooked it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


your welcome! and thanks!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


i liked it, kind of reminds me of the story i ve been writing on here. I m interested in hearing more! and thanks for the review

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FANTASTIC WRIGHT! PHENOMINAL!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2010
Last Updated on November 28, 2010
Tags: shadows, life, paths, good, bad

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