Listen To Their Story

Listen To Their Story

A Poem by Jordyn Lee

The shadows on the wall say a lot more than you think... :)

The shadow's on the wall
telling their tale
of happiness and sorrow
of success and fail
Love and hatred
peace and war
Their imagination
opening a new door
to a peaceful heaven
and an anguished hell
Which of these is the right path?
Only time will tell

Dancing, Twirling
reciting their story
of love so gentle
Of hate so gory

Which path will they choose?
Which side will they take?
For that is your story,
For you to make

© 2010 Jordyn Lee

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nice =)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Well written and much enjoyed!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Great Poem! I love the suspense and the emotions throughout. I wondered what was going to happen the whole time and the poem ended the same way. You really hooked it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago

your welcome! and thanks!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

i liked it, kind of reminds me of the story i ve been writing on here. I m interested in hearing more! and thanks for the review

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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6 Reviews
Shelved in 5 Libraries
Added on March 26, 2010
Last Updated on November 28, 2010
Tags: shadows, life, paths, good, bad


Jordyn Lee
Jordyn Lee


Writing... I've loved it since a child. and i plan to keep going until i'm old and can no longer hold a pencil or type! :D more..