Listen To Their Story

The shadows on the wall say a lot more than you think... :)

The shadow's on the wall

telling their tale

of happiness and sorrow

of success and fail

Love and hatred

peace and war

Their imagination

opening a new door

to a peaceful heaven

and an anguished hell

Which of these is the right path?

Only time will tell

Dancing, Twirling

reciting their story

of love so gentle

Of hate so gory

Which path will they choose?

Which side will they take?

For that is your story,

For you to make

Reviews

[Ariene Ibana Venida]

nice =)

[Carolina Kel]

Well written and much enjoyed!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Great Poem! I love the suspense and the emotions throughout. I wondered what was going to happen the whole time and the poem ended the same way. You really hooked it up.

[Jordyn Lee]

your welcome! and thanks!! :)

[Alex Zynder]

i liked it, kind of reminds me of the story i ve been writing on here. I m interested in hearing more! and thanks for the review

[~*_Michelle_*~]

FANTASTIC WRIGHT! PHENOMINAL!