Beyond This World

Beyond This World

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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a world i saw in a dream...

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She danced across the ocean water
the sun following behind
laughing with our sons and daughters
looking for more balloons to find
Giggling, laughing, soaring through the sky
a land of color coated sweets below
a land in which elephants could fly
and where you could shrink or grow
Aging a hundred years a second
but still staying the same
diving into the ocean, as they beckoned 
playing the little fishies game
Where anything can happen, and anything will
flying, dying, and coming back alive
endless fun, endless everything, until
when it all disappears, and your back in your hive
As you jump from your marshmallow sheets
don't you fret, my child
In this land, whom did you meet?
And like a 5 year old, we're twirling away, wild

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


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Jordyn Lee
HAHAHA it's sorta lame .-.

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Amazing write!! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cute, fun, and wymsical. A must read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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WoW-this is so full of expressionism and imigism,
just gloriously beautiful !!! u r o talented !!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece is so Lucy in the sky with diamonds.
Great job well done.



Posted 10 Years Ago


HAHAHA reading this made me happy! this is awesome -Mattox

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Posted 10 Years Ago


AMAZINGG! it was different, but i like different. -courtland.

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Posted 10 Years Ago


The meaning? hmm... the meaning behind this poem is: even when times are at its worst, there's always that special place we can just disappear too. It seems like everyone is creating their own little fantasy worlds, and as have i. i just wanted to share a glimpse of mine with you all:]

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice poem good flow and rhyming :) gotta question the meaning thou :) nevertheless great work thanks for sharing :)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Very upbeat, cute, very cute lol. couldn't help but chuckle at the marsmallow sheets because of the fact that they sound very comfy lol. Despite it being so random it runs together very well

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Posted 10 Years Ago


this was a cute poem, it makes you wonder how things really would be in your own little world, i enjoyed this, it was simple and well written, good write.

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Posted 10 Years Ago



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Last Updated on November 28, 2010
Tags: beautiful, world, dreams, wonderland
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