public enemies

public enemies

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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06/2011

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two worlds apart, separate lives
tangled on the battle front
                 bodies lay mangled at our hands
oh the forest we have torn down
desperately trying to reach each other  
                 oh the cities we have laid to waste
only to be in each others arms
acting on our criminal attributes 
                  reduced to our primal instincts 
now we're riding around, raining terror
our bullets shower in waves
                   they will never take us alive, my love
feeling like a scene Bonnie & Clyde 
our essence is on this long road 
                   our liveliness beats from the speakers
you laugh at the blue lights in the mirror
pointing at the absurd billboards
                    the scenery flies by in perfection
in this moment I am truly happy
please don't wake me up


© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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WOW!
There is so much in this short but powerful piece of writing! The metaphors and comparison to the army battlefield is really exhilarating. The poem creates a speed that matches that of the field. Though I comprehend the message you convey, my stronger interpretation of this is totally different to yours - for I do not see the cars so much - instead I relate to relations, changing and growth of landscapes.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
A

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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WOW!
There is so much in this short but powerful piece of writing! The metaphors and comparison to the army battlefield is really exhilarating. The poem creates a speed that matches that of the field. Though I comprehend the message you convey, my stronger interpretation of this is totally different to yours - for I do not see the cars so much - instead I relate to relations, changing and growth of landscapes.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
A

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oce again your poem amazes me! great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Holy S**t!!! Thats amazing!!!! Btw, my friend still thinks your hot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem. i like the reference to Bonnie and Clyde. keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good!! Love the reference to Bonnie & Clyde. You're use of metaphors is awesome. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another good writings of yours =]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brilliantly written, great use of imagery, love you imagination and the theme of a dream!


Love it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the reference of Bonnie and Clyde. This was good. Made me think about living in a dream. Good work :3

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I saw Public Enemies, with Johnny Depp. That was an awesome film; and this poem, I believe, really does pay a respectful homage to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem. It reminds me of a lot of crime movies I have seen. Specifically Public Enemies. Good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Tags: romance, bonnie, clyde, emo, scene, love, rebellion, dark, surrealism

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joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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