Luna

10/2011

                                                      

                                                  Luna the little white cat...

                                             she terrorizes my house

                                                            s***s like crazy

                                                pisses on the curtains

                                                    runs up and down

                                               the hallways at night

                                                    puts her cold wet

                                                 nose on me while

                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...

                                                  I will love my cat

                                                    because sometimes 

                                                        I do love her

 

Author's Note

True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

Reviews

[Zoe Jay]

Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

[Canicus]

The beginning is funny but it's a good poem I wouldn't say sweet but more of a loving one, Good write

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

LOL! I have a new kitten who is driving me insane. I can definitely relate to this one!

[Daytonight]

Made me smile. Pets are wonderful things and can bring us so much joy and yet can get into so much trouble. Well done.

[Alexander Mccarthey]

I know how you feel. I have three cats and, though i love them dearly, sometimes they drive me up the wall. This is such a cute little poem. I love it!

[Julie Beth]

i laughed on this. My mom won't let me have a cat, or any living thing... anyways this was funny and even though cats can sometimes be a pain, they're cute so it makes up for it awesome job :)

They are, good... they always follow me... like they follow you too ;) xx

[Jazique]

Nice job. that plays in many situations to which the you may dislike something or someone at times but, at the end of the day you're happy you have them you did that very well I enjoyed the true expression put into with words and the way you wrote it. I admit the light blue was a little hard to see but, it did remind me of lunar herself as if she was their. Anyways excellent job and it sounds like a good cat at the end of the day and sounds like my cousins new cat too with the cold nose and all while sleeping.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was adorable.

[Trublood13]

aww thats so weird

[StarSandwich]

- Sorry be away for awhile, but I'm back now for awhile :D I'M going though poems and have over 300 read requests. :D but I'll get though them one by one... I have some time.

Well... Heheh I love cats. I want a kitten call sandwich... :/ My Best buddy says its a dumb name but I like it.

Hahaha, Luna sounds like one hell of an awesome cat :D