Luna

Luna

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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10/2011

"
                                                      
                                                  Luna the little white cat...
                                             she terrorizes my house
                                                            s***s like crazy
                                                pisses on the curtains
                                                    runs up and down
                                               the hallways at night
                                                    puts her cold wet
                                                 nose on me while
                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...
                                                  I will love my cat
                                                    because sometimes 
                                                        I do love her
 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

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Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I know the love you feel. I too SOMETIMES love my cat. He's a warm body to hold, and he loves me unconditionally. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Aw, Joshua, that's really sweet! I'm not fond of cats because 100%, I'm a huge dog-lover...Anyway, such a cute poem... :)))
Love the name too! Luna... ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore cats and am often associated with one for my endless laziness by my friends. Hahaha. I liked this. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm allergic to cats, but I like your poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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lol! yup yup yup!
i love cats too! they are great companions!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stroking cats also lowers colestral and exercises the heart. Love how you didn't pull any punches about the nature of the beast, but why not forgive them their faults az they do us ours. Nicely penned, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Little fir-balls of mischief ha ha, I love this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dogs have owners Cats have servants

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sweet:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I saw that pic of the cat and I thought it was mine lol She has a pink nose and is all white except for a couple grey spots on her back and tail. Then I read the poem and realized you stole my f*****g cat :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on October 7, 2011
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Tags: pet, kitten, anger management

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joshua deathdealer
joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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