Complete Man

Complete Man

A Poem by Canicus

A man of complete love
sees not the true cruelty of this world
only the beautiful part
the one that has crystallized and pearled

A man of despair
is blind to the bright rays of sun
just glances at the horrid truth
look right at the damage that has been done

A man of peace
justice, is someone they've never met
let the wrongs that have been done slide
revenge, you will never get

A man of theory
can't see the element of surprise
never goes unexpected
always tactical, but never sudden

A complete man utilizes all
a mixture of heart, mind, mercy, and bronze
looks at a whole instead of a piece
knows how to use both pro's and con's

© 2012 Canicus

Author's Note

enjoy, tell me what you think.
I think it might be kind of cool to see what you can add on to this, so I encourage you to leave comments including something of your own creation that'll fit.

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this is really good...a great way of seeing every aspect of a man at different angles,,,good write

Posted 9 Years Ago

A complete man of passion
ready to defend anyone
or anything,
ready to take on the world,
ready to defend...

I like the additions of color and how you emphasized certain words. I think that it was very clever. I added on but I'm not sure that it fits. Overall I think this was a good piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

It fits. thanks for your input.

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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