Complete Man

A man of complete love

sees not the true cruelty of this world

only the beautiful part

the one that has crystallized and pearled

A man of despair

is blind to the bright rays of sun

just glances at the horrid truth

look right at the damage that has been done

A man of peace

justice, is someone they've never met

let the wrongs that have been done slide

revenge, you will never get

A man of theory

can't see the element of surprise

never goes unexpected

always tactical, but never sudden

A complete man utilizes all

a mixture of heart, mind, mercy, and bronze

looks at a whole instead of a piece

knows how to use both pro's and con's

Author's Note

enjoy, tell me what you think.
I think it might be kind of cool to see what you can add on to this, so I encourage you to leave comments including something of your own creation that'll fit.

Reviews

[Sirius King]

this is really good...a great way of seeing every aspect of a man at different angles,,,good write

[Tasha]

A complete man of passion
ready to defend anyone
or anything,
ready to take on the world,
ready to defend...

I like the additions of color and how you emphasized certain words. I think that it was very clever. I added on but I'm not sure that it fits. Overall I think this was a good piece.

[Canicus]

It fits. thanks for your input.

[Tasha]

You're welcome.