I can be...

I can be

a beautiful field of flowers

on a bright summer's day

shining on through countless hours

I can be

the pure hatred in your soul

the thing brings out the worst in you

that makes you pay the toll

I can be

the very chills down your spine

making you shake in bed at night

putting you in a wicked bind

I can be

very powerful emotions

literature can be a strong thing

the tear in your eye or your heart's devotion

Author's Note

This is a journal entry I did in English class. It was a free write. enjoy

Reviews

[AJ Kristiansen]

I love the imagery and the contrast of what you could do... very nice write Canicus :) "... chills down your spine.. making you shake in bed at night, putting you in a wicked bind..." Excellent!

[Sarah]

Love it. The rhyme method works realy well. The whole thing flows realy nicely. Nice write.

[Mockingbird]

i can see all the incarnations we are able to become. we can be the agony or the ecstasy. if we could be un- inhibited we could do what ever we wanted without fear of consequences. it's our choice. great journal entry. great poem.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love how the stanzas are different, as if different moods. Like the first stanza is beautiful and sweet like a imagery of relaxed emotions, then the second stanza is in depth more and deeper, darker. Continuing with the dark feeling in stanza three, yet it seems more like horror. Then the last stanza, that just gives the write a twist; I love how you ended this poem talking about literature. Literature can indeed play with emotions and capture so many, just like this poem has done in each stanza. Not sure if you planed it that way, but I love it. And this was a free write... brilliant write it is. Really nice rhyming as well. Loved. Enjoyed.

[xSamilynnx]

i love the imagry! its really good and well written, i like how you describe several different things and the descriptions that follow... Keep writting!!

[Rachel]

amazing. great write.

[MandaBear]

Very cool! A very beautiful write that is lovely.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is so beautiful and powerfully moving! What a wonderful write. Well done.

[Rob Santana]

Really cool piece. It's read like a description of love and hate. My opinion, you can continue writing more with this one

[Becky C Strukamp]

This poems holds so much truth. Very powerful!